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entranced by
your smile
your sigh
I need
your touch
those lips
so much
I see
you there
I cant
not stare
I dream
of "we"
but you
cant see
and I
cant show
cause they
cant know
I feel
this way
what would
they say
if I
told you
what would
you do
run to
me today?
stay there
far away?
just ignore
my question?
maybe laugh,
offer suggestion?
so I
must keep
to myself
cannot leak
how I
feel true
and I
love you....

[comments] => 9 [counter] => 342 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

my secret love

Contributed by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:42:46 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am
entranced by
your smile
your sigh
I need
your touch
those lips
so much
I see
you there
I cant
not stare
I dream
of "we"
but you
cant see
and I
cant show
cause they
cant know
I feel
this way
what would
they say
if I
told you
what would
you do
run to
me today?
stay there
far away?
just ignore
my question?
maybe laugh,
offer suggestion?
so I
must keep
to myself
cannot leak
how I
feel true
and I
love you....

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-06-05 02:42:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:48:52 AM AEST
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AW...my favorite writer....and truthfully honestly you are....I love the way you I dont know you are just an awesome writer....I love it...please just keep it coming and keep it up please...and trust me I will buy your books when your published....lol great
Dani

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:50:08 AM AEST
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I wrote a very similar poem once. Dont it suck? Meanwhile is there a reason why you can't be with him?

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:01:40 AM AEST
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Oh yea the flow of this is so......words can not describe the way this hits me,of course i am partial to anything secret,but still,This is beautiful
well written.

The Wind.......

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:18:03 AM AEST
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Very good write.
Someone is very lucky.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 08:59:34 AM AEST
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love the style and flow of this its hard when you keep this secret maybe you should tell??
Michelle

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:24:47 PM AEST
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If you write like this, I wouldn't keep your love a secret...

E

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:00:54 PM AEST
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but what if opening up and telling her, pushses her away? Id rather admire from afar and have her there, than tell her and have her leave... tough call.

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:36:25 PM AEST
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It would be hard for us too, holder... we'd suffer for a lack of these poems. They truly are beautiful. You know I loved your two words at a time... this is just as incredible.

Re: my secret love (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:23:02 PM AEST
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i understand your concern about pushing her away or scaring her. but if you already have one that loves you so completely, then maybe she will too. there is a chance she'll see the same things i do.

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