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These feelings drain me
I have nothing but them
After you left me
You are doing this
To help me
But I think otherwise
You don't want a threat
To you and your life

I have to eliminate these feelings
Or destroy myself within
Is there anything left to destroy?
I feel empty except for the hate
The hate that replaced everything

Again another fall
These feelings grew too much
They drain me everyday
I can't take this another day
But I have to with the choice made

Again another fall
It seems I never leave the ground
Except to fall for lies
After you left
I realized my mistake
Of ever thinking I could trust you
You shattered me

Again another fall
As I fall into my shattered self
Away from the pain endured
The way life stood [comments] => 6 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Shattered Feelings

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Shattered Feelings

These feelings drain me
I have nothing but them
After you left me
You are doing this
To help me
But I think otherwise
You don't want a threat
To you and your life

I have to eliminate these feelings
Or destroy myself within
Is there anything left to destroy?
I feel empty except for the hate
The hate that replaced everything

Again another fall
These feelings grew too much
They drain me everyday
I can't take this another day
But I have to with the choice made

Again another fall
It seems I never leave the ground
Except to fall for lies
After you left
I realized my mistake
Of ever thinking I could trust you
You shattered me

Again another fall
As I fall into my shattered self
Away from the pain endured
The way life stood

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-06-05 22:15:34]
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Re: Shattered Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:18:40 PM AEST
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touching write
michelle

Re: Shattered Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:28:28 PM AEST
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very painful story, but your expression and wording is beautiful... great write

Re: Shattered Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:50:05 PM AEST
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I agree with the first 2 comments its a great way to express your feeling so beautifully...I loved it...great write keep it coming keep it up....I love your writing its great
read and comment my stuff if you want, I'd love to hear what you think....
much love,
Dani

Re: Shattered Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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I liked this.
Sometimes you do have to let go no matter how much it may hurt.
Good write.
Very emotional.

Re: Shattered Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:32:02 AM AEST
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You know some say, that it is best to get to know someone, before you fall for them. I myself find that hard to believe though. People can be very sweet in the beginning, and then show their true feelings later on in a relationship, but it is up to us all not to make one another fall. Always get to know the person before you ever fall for them, or you will always be walked on in life. Other than that this was a very sad, and touching read. I wish you the best of luck, and hope you get to feeling better.

Re: Shattered Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:32:44 AM AEST
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Awwwww I wish I could give you a hug, this was a really sad poem, but you worded it so beauitifully....

takecare
Pixie xx

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