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Array ( [sid] => 50628 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scars [time] => 2004-06-06 09:34:16 [hometext] => Replace negativity with postivity [bodytext] => Scars are tough sometimes mean
Despite their often times unseen
There's those that are obvious and those that are not
Some that often haunt us a lot
Something deep rooted within
Which makes us want to give up as opposed to win

But we can fight it all the way
So that these wretched scars don't have to stay
We can build ourselves up strong, so that even despite all the wrong
We will make everything that counts, to a decent amount
And we will carry on


Re: Scars (User Rating: 1) by pixie on Sunday, June 06 2004 @ 09:42:26 CDT (User Info | Send a Message | Journal) Great poem, very positive 5/5 pixie xx
by AnGeL_M (AnGeL_At_YoUr_SiDe198221@yahoo.com) on Sunday, June 06 2004 @ 10:05:36 CDT (User Info | Send a Message) Great Write Very Enjoyable Read !!! Keep Em Coming :-) LoVe,Hugs & God Bless LoVe - AnGeL [comments] => 5 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SweetRhythm [notes] => (Comments added by Mod from double post which was deleted) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Scars

Contributed by SweetRhythm on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:34:16 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Scars are tough sometimes mean
Despite their often times unseen
There's those that are obvious and those that are not
Some that often haunt us a lot
Something deep rooted within
Which makes us want to give up as opposed to win

But we can fight it all the way
So that these wretched scars don't have to stay
We can build ourselves up strong, so that even despite all the wrong
We will make everything that counts, to a decent amount
And we will carry on


Re: Scars (User Rating: 1) by pixie on Sunday, June 06 2004 @ 09:42:26 CDT (User Info | Send a Message | Journal) Great poem, very positive 5/5 pixie xx
by AnGeL_M (AnGeL_At_YoUr_SiDe198221@yahoo.com) on Sunday, June 06 2004 @ 10:05:36 CDT (User Info | Send a Message) Great Write Very Enjoyable Read !!! Keep Em Coming :-) LoVe,Hugs & God Bless LoVe - AnGeL




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Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Theo_stretner on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:48:54 AM AEST
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Thats a good poem where was your motivation??


Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:37:46 PM AEST
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Nice write very encouraging I thought.

Whisper


Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by drinkWATER on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:40:26 AM AEST
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rare to find a piece so positive on this dot com.refreshing

DW


Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:52:08 PM AEST
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deep... I like your writing, you pour alot of emotions into your words. thats how I think it should be done. A+++


Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:41:00 PM AEST
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Great write. U were right, i can relate to this.

Dizza




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