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Array ( [sid] => 5070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Said [time] => 2002-10-14 16:15:00 [hometext] => The problem this poem deals with has already been resolved, but I'm posting this anyway because of the parts that say how much my best friend, whom this is about, means to me, because that'll never change. [bodytext] => If you would only let me in
You'd see the mess my heart is in
If you would only look inside
You'd see how much I'm hurt inside
I know that I can't take this pain
The scars will forever remain
When you're not there I'm so empty
No one else fills me completely

Whoever else depends on me
You're the one that always gets me
Without you, there's nowhere to go
There's no one else I really know
Please step down off this crazy ride
Your feelings ebbing like the tide
Please look inside at who you are
You'll find me there, I'm never far

I never thought we'd walk these shores
That my love was stronger than yours
With every thousand words I pen
It's all the same as if just ten
Though I'd bring down the moon and sun
The end is here, watching you run
The fear of losing burns within
Coz if you do this, no one wins

No matter who walks in and out
My love won't falter, have no doubt
You are the best thing in my life
And all I need to set things right
It's no lie I can't live alone
And without you I'd be alone
There's not a soul on earth today
That needs you, like I do, to stay

You must know you're my special thing
I'm up here flying without wings
I do believe our souls are one
And meant to meet under this sun
There's no one I'll ever need more
You're the only thing I live for
We've shared so much, the joy, the pain
The sunshine cutting through the rain

You've gotta know you're the only
Thing that means everything to me
I remember life without you
If you leave me now, I'll be through
You said your world revolves 'round me
But now he's everything you need
Well I could get by without him
But without you the lights would dim... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 16 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
You Said

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 04:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



If you would only let me in
You'd see the mess my heart is in
If you would only look inside
You'd see how much I'm hurt inside
I know that I can't take this pain
The scars will forever remain
When you're not there I'm so empty
No one else fills me completely

Whoever else depends on me
You're the one that always gets me
Without you, there's nowhere to go
There's no one else I really know
Please step down off this crazy ride
Your feelings ebbing like the tide
Please look inside at who you are
You'll find me there, I'm never far

I never thought we'd walk these shores
That my love was stronger than yours
With every thousand words I pen
It's all the same as if just ten
Though I'd bring down the moon and sun
The end is here, watching you run
The fear of losing burns within
Coz if you do this, no one wins

No matter who walks in and out
My love won't falter, have no doubt
You are the best thing in my life
And all I need to set things right
It's no lie I can't live alone
And without you I'd be alone
There's not a soul on earth today
That needs you, like I do, to stay

You must know you're my special thing
I'm up here flying without wings
I do believe our souls are one
And meant to meet under this sun
There's no one I'll ever need more
You're the only thing I live for
We've shared so much, the joy, the pain
The sunshine cutting through the rain

You've gotta know you're the only
Thing that means everything to me
I remember life without you
If you leave me now, I'll be through
You said your world revolves 'round me
But now he's everything you need
Well I could get by without him
But without you the lights would dim...




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Re: You Said (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 07:11:59 AM AEST
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Dee. I love you so much! My world would die if you weren't there. I would have nothing to live for either. You mean so much to me. You're my breath when I can't breathe, you're my eyes when I can't see, you're my heart when I can't feel. That line still stands true, and it always will. I can't believe you touched my heart so fast. I only found out who you were in febuary, and I've only really known you for seven months, and already we can't ever be severed. We were ment to become best friends.

Love always and forever,

~ Em


Re: You Said (User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 05:09:12 PM AEST
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A beautiful tribute
excellent write my friend,
Sharon;)
I read it over and over




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