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I'm drowning in all of my emotion, Being crushed by its weight. Sinking under it all becoming hopeless. So confused by my suroundings.

Never knowing where I am, or who I will be.

Tired and cold , so alone all the time. I'am a dangerous problem,a Hazard to myself. Soon I'll explode and won't stop.

I'll let the blood flow freely , let it drain from my veins. Taking my soul with its grasp. I'm addicted to cutting, it calls to me.

But when I try to do it I remember my promise to you. I see your face , and losing you is worse then death.

I'll love you always and forever and forever, you keep me alive. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => NaughtyGurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

You saved me

Contributed by NaughtyGurl on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:38:07 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm Burning Up inside, holding my breath. Dieing from the inside out.

I'm drowning in all of my emotion, Being crushed by its weight. Sinking under it all becoming hopeless. So confused by my suroundings.

Never knowing where I am, or who I will be.

Tired and cold , so alone all the time. I'am a dangerous problem,a Hazard to myself. Soon I'll explode and won't stop.

I'll let the blood flow freely , let it drain from my veins. Taking my soul with its grasp. I'm addicted to cutting, it calls to me.

But when I try to do it I remember my promise to you. I see your face , and losing you is worse then death.

I'll love you always and forever and forever, you keep me alive.

Copyright © NaughtyGurl ... [ 2004-06-07 07:38:07]
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Re: You saved me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:45:19 AM AEST
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great poem, very well written

pixie xx

Re: You saved me (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:30:14 AM AEST
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Find a member called [ another_dimension ] and read her poem called 'WATCH MY SKIN SPLIT' you may like it. you're ver good at expressing these feelings. i am impressed x

Re: You saved me (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:45:18 PM AEST
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It saddens me that you are so utterly depressed. It's my wish for you to find something very secure, even more secure than another person to put your hope in. Something else that will keep you living. Something completely reliable 100% of the time and won't let you down. People are fickle. Be careful. Good luck. Feel better!
~Carrie~

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