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Array ( [sid] => 50846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blurry [time] => 2004-06-07 17:26:59 [hometext] => You know when you’re at the eye doctor and he says, ‘Better? 1 or 2?’ and they’re both really really close, but they’re both blurry…or when you spin in circles and get dizzy...like that. Or in The Princess Bride when Vizzini tries to use ‘logic’ that too. [bodytext] => Which is better one or two?
Should I choose us? Or me? Or you?
I’m so dizzy, weak and small
But I’m sure you’d catch me should I fall
Alas!
Clearly I cannot choose the path in front of me
It’s too foggy
I could never choose the path in front of you
It’s too misty.
I can’t bear to take the path I see right now
It’s too hazy
I’m lost on these paths.
I’ve gone in search of myself
If I should return before I arrive
Ask me to wait.
If I stay lost
It’s too cloudy
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 64 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Blurry

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:26:59 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Which is better one or two?
Should I choose us? Or me? Or you?
I’m so dizzy, weak and small
But I’m sure you’d catch me should I fall
Alas!
Clearly I cannot choose the path in front of me
It’s too foggy
I could never choose the path in front of you
It’s too misty.
I can’t bear to take the path I see right now
It’s too hazy
I’m lost on these paths.
I’ve gone in search of myself
If I should return before I arrive
Ask me to wait.
If I stay lost
It’s too cloudy




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-06-07 17:26:59]
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Re: Blurry (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:44:09 PM AEST
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"If I should return before I arrive
Ask me to wait.
If I stay lost
It’s too cloudy"

very well written, your sense of being lost is very well described... good stuff.


Re: Blurry (User Rating: 1 )
by Tori on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:18:42 PM AEST
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This is very good poetry it all flows very nicely!




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