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Array ( [sid] => 50868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CAN WE? [time] => 2004-06-07 20:20:50 [hometext] => To the one that inspires me. Fantasy 4 Tony. [bodytext] =>





...Intwined...



...As One...





SultryRose's Signatures





Can we watch Stars
under luv's canopy,
roam in woods so free,
sleep till noon,
Feel me swoon?

Ca, Ca, ca, can we,
Streak in the rain,
Make luv like a huricane?
Ca, ca, ca, can we,
Get wild-n-free.

Can we dance in fire,
like my ancestors did,
Cut loose, be kids,
Put demons to hell,
With a read neck yell?

Only luv can survive
when all is done,
Can we, darlin, hon,
let luv float free,
Along with God, you, me?
[comments] => 15 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
CAN WE?

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:20:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics









...Intwined...



...As One...





SultryRose's Signatures





Can we watch Stars
under luv's canopy,
roam in woods so free,
sleep till noon,
Feel me swoon?

Ca, Ca, ca, can we,
Streak in the rain,
Make luv like a huricane?
Ca, ca, ca, can we,
Get wild-n-free.

Can we dance in fire,
like my ancestors did,
Cut loose, be kids,
Put demons to hell,
With a read neck yell?

Only luv can survive
when all is done,
Can we, darlin, hon,
let luv float free,
Along with God, you, me?




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-06-07 20:20:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:51:17 PM AEST
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great job

the voice


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:27:46 PM AEST
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Kewllllllll Emy! Bet he says "yes". LOL

Love n hugs,
Rita


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:53:11 PM AEST
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Great work - i loved this


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:47:21 AM AEST
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Plenty of blessings for this kind of work. Go on doing what u do well Emy.


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:35:48 AM AEST
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Sounds so romantic and lots of fun too!
How lively, robust, and adventuresome!
And you with your big heart and loving soul.
Why fantasize? Make it come true little Emy,
just you and he, and your ancestry makes 3.
Very different.......but so like you Emy. Your Poetry will stand for all times.
love
momconsue



Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:30:58 AM AEST
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I like. Beautiful view of strength in love. Where together true energy flows free, & Happiness is survival.
God bless you. Great poem.


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Korax on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:34:51 AM AEST
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Its like dancing amogst the elements. Great work


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:24:59 AM AEST
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Very nice indeed, Emy. I liked this one alot.
keep 'em coming..... Amber Rose :)


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:13:03 AM AEST
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Utterly romantic, a dancing praise to love!
Hugs,
Hur


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:33:45 AM AEST
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NICE ONE! WHAT AN IMAGINATION YOU HAVE!! IT WAS INSPIRING,WAY TO GO EMY!!!

LOL~DAN!!!!


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by hannahbanana on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:35:48 AM AEST
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oh wow. i love this,. great poem.


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:22:08 PM AEST
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cool picture. really nice poem, very interestingly written. nice job. i liked it.
Arden


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:51:43 AM AEST
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great picture emy girl, wonderful poem! hugs n' love nessa x

@->>->:-


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:27:12 AM AEST
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Sounds like great fun, my dream of sorts. Thank you for sharing this with us.


Re: CAN WE? (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:50:58 PM AEST
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