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everything you promised
everything you did to me...
I wonder why I stayed around for it.
I always thought I was strong
independent
able to cope...
but you broke me down, made me weak.
when you said how you cared
how you loved me
how we"d be forever...
I believed you, thought you'd never lie to me.
when you said I was handsome
that I was funny
how intelligent I was...
I feel into your charms, I let down my guard.
and then you saw this opening
how trusting I was
how vulnerable I made myself...
and decided to crush me, destroy my life.

Im so sorry that I wasn't good enough for you
I tried so hard, to give you everything
I wish you the best in your life
I hope you have everything you ever want
and if you ever get lonely
or want to return
I'll be here alone with my stone heart

waiting to love again....

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my stone heart

Contributed by holderofthestone on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

when I think about everything you said
everything you promised
everything you did to me...
I wonder why I stayed around for it.
I always thought I was strong
independent
able to cope...
but you broke me down, made me weak.
when you said how you cared
how you loved me
how we"d be forever...
I believed you, thought you'd never lie to me.
when you said I was handsome
that I was funny
how intelligent I was...
I feel into your charms, I let down my guard.
and then you saw this opening
how trusting I was
how vulnerable I made myself...
and decided to crush me, destroy my life.

Im so sorry that I wasn't good enough for you
I tried so hard, to give you everything
I wish you the best in your life
I hope you have everything you ever want
and if you ever get lonely
or want to return
I'll be here alone with my stone heart

waiting to love again....

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-06-07 23:02:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my stone heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Avila on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:08:33 PM AEST
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yikes! well who did u wrong? just brush it off at least u got a good poem out of it..nice job

Re: my stone heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:30:10 PM AEST
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Well... I hate to state the obvious, but a man with a heart of stone could not possibly write the kind of poetry you do, holder. Silly you! Those of us that have been reading along will beg to differ with you on this one... Still lovely as always - but - this one doesn't quite seem far to you. You know I mean that in the kindest way.... you need, perhaps, to just see your heart as others do. : )

Re: my stone heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:09:03 AM AEST
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your poems make me cry, because they are so liek mine...me and you are like going through the same *****...but it was a great write as always...i dont know your hwole situation but I know that girl needs to look at you and hear you out and understand that you care soooooo much about her...I cant say that enough....I love your work...you write how you feel, you have powerful thoughts...it was again another great write....MASTERPIECE.....
much love,
Dani

Re: my stone heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:56:08 AM AEST
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wow, this was very emotional.. you are good enough, dont ever feel like you're not good enough for anyone because its simply not true, wonderfully written poem,
takecare

Pixie xx

Re: my stone heart (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:17:41 AM AEST
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beautiful poem baby. i'll make you live again. just come and recite some poetry to me(sigh). good job

Re: my stone heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Calista on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:07:36 AM AEST
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interesting how in the first part of the poem you are portraying how you were hurt, how she destroyed your life...and then in the second part it is you that is apologizing and wishing her the best. it takes a soft and forgiving heart to write through such pain and still come through with the best of personalities. youre heart may be stone, holder...but it will crack and crumble and show the true you underneath. you'll live again...this reminds me very much of a poem i wrote called Stone Covered Heart
~Calista

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