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Backdoor beauty, never did ask permission

Cannibal in deniel, savor crimson taste
Daisy chain, eight bourgeois bodies interlaced

Exhibitionist, no point if no one observes
Frotteurism, just to find the perfect curve

Golden gifts, ' doom generation' s ingenuity
Homosexual tendencies, natural promiscuity

Incestuous siblings, private show to recreate
Johns and courtesans, you so quickly desecrate

Kleptophilia, need to hold on to it securely
Latex, leather and lace, peel it off leisurely

Mutilation of 'the piano teacher', wish i had nerve
Necrophilia, I dabbled in Anais Nin's oeuvre

Orgies with opium, the twenties masquerade
Pedophiles ' happiness' frightfully displayed

Quaff it if you can, the bitter taste of snow
Rapist of a seriel kind, but you never said no

Sadomasochism, dominatrix with a pink tool
Transvestite lover, an exception to the rule

Unconsious punch to the back of the head
Voyeuristic deviant watches me in my bed

Western grip, accessible autoerotica
Xavier prep, Catholic schoolgirl's 'exotica'

Youthful morsel's reflection, scopophilia's desert
Zoophilia's 'pink flamingos'...last straw you sick pervert
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Fetish

Contributed by brigitte7735 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:07:08 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Asyphxophilia, my face in the cushion
Backdoor beauty, never did ask permission

Cannibal in deniel, savor crimson taste
Daisy chain, eight bourgeois bodies interlaced

Exhibitionist, no point if no one observes
Frotteurism, just to find the perfect curve

Golden gifts, ' doom generation' s ingenuity
Homosexual tendencies, natural promiscuity

Incestuous siblings, private show to recreate
Johns and courtesans, you so quickly desecrate

Kleptophilia, need to hold on to it securely
Latex, leather and lace, peel it off leisurely

Mutilation of 'the piano teacher', wish i had nerve
Necrophilia, I dabbled in Anais Nin's oeuvre

Orgies with opium, the twenties masquerade
Pedophiles ' happiness' frightfully displayed

Quaff it if you can, the bitter taste of snow
Rapist of a seriel kind, but you never said no

Sadomasochism, dominatrix with a pink tool
Transvestite lover, an exception to the rule

Unconsious punch to the back of the head
Voyeuristic deviant watches me in my bed

Western grip, accessible autoerotica
Xavier prep, Catholic schoolgirl's 'exotica'

Youthful morsel's reflection, scopophilia's desert
Zoophilia's 'pink flamingos'...last straw you sick pervert

Copyright © brigitte7735 ... [ 2004-06-08 03:07:08]
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Re: Fetish (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:17:29 AM AEST
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Good write. Still a little creepy though. I kind of...umm relate (???) though.

Lindsey

Re: Fetish (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:07:16 AM AEST
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wow, this was amazing, loved every word in it, different but so great 5/5

pixie xx

Re: Fetish (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:25:07 AM AEST
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Well, we all have our experimental phases during the course of our lifetimes...

A few things here really left me impressed: first, the comlex rhymes--for example, ingenuity/promiscuity, masquerade/displayed and recreate/desecrate. This, along with your advanced diction and word choice, shows that you have very strong control of both rhyme and phrasing.

Also, I love the A-Z acrostic and the theme (which is usually considered controversial and taboo). This piece just screams originality, and I absolutely love it.

This is damn good, and really showcases the brightest traits of your writing style. Magnificent, to put it simply.

Strolling hand in hand on the beach,
-Dan

Re: Fetish (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:45:47 AM AEST
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Well, I don't think you left anything out. Interesting. You have quite a way with words.
Stitch

Re: Fetish (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:43:44 PM AEST
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I believe Dan said everything that is going through my mind so ill leave it as, exquisit.

Capitvating piece, and the A-Z really does polish it off nicely

Luke

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