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Array ( [sid] => 50921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heavenly Thought [time] => 2004-06-08 06:16:16 [hometext] => getting turned around in the wrong direction.....it happens once in a while [bodytext] => _____________

Linear thinking was all about you
Before sunspots became blind spots
Darkness surrenders all its power
Lays down without a whimper
Heavenly dog

Constant chatter bothered you
Wore down your defenses
Left your emotions in tatters
Without any sustenance or recourse
Heavenly host

Vast amounts of vision wasted looking
At things that don’t matter
Staring up her skirt was a waste of time
She walked off without knowing your name
Heavenly woman

Nothing is as smooth or sure as it should be
You notice this and try to exclude yourself
Fastening blame on all the others
Until you find yourself so utterly lonely
Heavenly solitude

Heavy weight of inarticulate memory
Causes premature responses
Defiant gestures and uncontrolled anger
Linger on the tip of your tongue
Heavenly voices

Professing to lay down all that you are
Give it up and let it go
But it’s probably too late now
Null and void all exchanges
Heavenly peace


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Heavenly Thought

Contributed by merry on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:16:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



_____________

Linear thinking was all about you
Before sunspots became blind spots
Darkness surrenders all its power
Lays down without a whimper
Heavenly dog

Constant chatter bothered you
Wore down your defenses
Left your emotions in tatters
Without any sustenance or recourse
Heavenly host

Vast amounts of vision wasted looking
At things that don’t matter
Staring up her skirt was a waste of time
She walked off without knowing your name
Heavenly woman

Nothing is as smooth or sure as it should be
You notice this and try to exclude yourself
Fastening blame on all the others
Until you find yourself so utterly lonely
Heavenly solitude

Heavy weight of inarticulate memory
Causes premature responses
Defiant gestures and uncontrolled anger
Linger on the tip of your tongue
Heavenly voices

Professing to lay down all that you are
Give it up and let it go
But it’s probably too late now
Null and void all exchanges
Heavenly peace






Copyright © merry ... [ 2004-06-08 06:16:16]
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Re: Heavenly Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:23:55 AM AEST
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Interesting perspective and beautifully written as always. Stitch


Re: Heavenly Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:35:28 AM AEST
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wonderful definitions..skilled job..and it brings many smiles to me. :-) venkat


Re: Heavenly Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:58:18 AM AEST
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beautiful, wonderfully intersting and brilliantly written


Re: Heavenly Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:25:23 PM AEST
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Heavenly poetry too...you always make me think when I read your writes. I will never understand why people arent flocking to read you. You are clearly the most talented free verse writer on this site. WAKE UP PEOPLE!!!

Very well done as always
Roses for my daisy
Larry


Re: Heavenly Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:53:52 PM AEST
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sounds like this person has let all the good go and pass him by in life, living on dreams, quite sad, very well written poem! hugs n' love nessa

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