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Array ( [sid] => 51160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lies Within [time] => 2004-06-09 15:00:57 [hometext] => I wrote this one day in deep thought about life and the past. [bodytext] => Lies Within

If only there was a time machine
I’d wade through memories, stop where it seemed
That life was gentle, warm and kind
When the troubles of life were not on my mind.

I’d gaze at the mountains, the stars, the sky,
And know in my heart there’s a reason why.
See now I know God placed them for me
Teaching his power and his love sets us free.

I would cherish the flowers, not just walk by
Pay closer attention, the clouds in the sky.
I’d not listen to others who had such great plans
I’d follow my heart and Gods guiding hand.

The old man on the park bench that said hello
I think now I’d stop, if only to show.
That I can return kindness no matter the age
I’ll be him with the turn of a page.

I’d spend more time with family you see,
Instead of providing their wants more then needs.
These simple things if we understand
We would all enjoy a happier land.

Sometimes its good to stop and look back
And realize things in life that we lack.
But starting over can be only a dream,
For alas, there is no time machine.

Could it be the answer is something so small?
If for some things in life we refuse to fall.
Finding that time where we’d like to begin,
Means maybe the answer lies within.

Woody McDaniel
Copy write 2003

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Lies Within

Contributed by WoodyMc44 on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Lies Within

If only there was a time machine
I’d wade through memories, stop where it seemed
That life was gentle, warm and kind
When the troubles of life were not on my mind.

I’d gaze at the mountains, the stars, the sky,
And know in my heart there’s a reason why.
See now I know God placed them for me
Teaching his power and his love sets us free.

I would cherish the flowers, not just walk by
Pay closer attention, the clouds in the sky.
I’d not listen to others who had such great plans
I’d follow my heart and Gods guiding hand.

The old man on the park bench that said hello
I think now I’d stop, if only to show.
That I can return kindness no matter the age
I’ll be him with the turn of a page.

I’d spend more time with family you see,
Instead of providing their wants more then needs.
These simple things if we understand
We would all enjoy a happier land.

Sometimes its good to stop and look back
And realize things in life that we lack.
But starting over can be only a dream,
For alas, there is no time machine.

Could it be the answer is something so small?
If for some things in life we refuse to fall.
Finding that time where we’d like to begin,
Means maybe the answer lies within.

Woody McDaniel
Copy write 2003





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Re: Lies Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:31:36 PM AEST
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This is quite nice, Woody. My favorite part:

The old man on the park bench that said hello
I think now I’d stop, if only to show.
That I can return kindness no matter the age
I’ll be him with the turn of a page.

The last line in particular got me. The entire piece is well structure... and dare I say, thought provoking! And... I hope you're open to suggestions, because I'm about to make a tiny one --- I'd remove the comma from the cloud line and replace it with "to"... you may have intended two different thoughts there, but I thing it flows better when tied together.

I enjoyed this... and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!


Re: Lies Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:57:31 PM AEST
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excellent write. =]




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