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It was something I had to do
Even so I hate myself
For the pain that I caused you.
You reminded me of my beauty
Each and every day
Perhaps you really loved me
I loved being treated that way.
And maybe I did love you
In the way that I still do
The way I'd love a memory
The memory of you
Now I want to hold you
Tell you everything's ok
Pleas just smile and tell me
That it's always been that way. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 24 [informant] => comfortablynumb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Bittersweet Memories

Contributed by comfortablynumb on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

You loved me and I pushed you away
It was something I had to do
Even so I hate myself
For the pain that I caused you.
You reminded me of my beauty
Each and every day
Perhaps you really loved me
I loved being treated that way.
And maybe I did love you
In the way that I still do
The way I'd love a memory
The memory of you
Now I want to hold you
Tell you everything's ok
Pleas just smile and tell me
That it's always been that way.

Copyright © comfortablynumb ... [ 2004-06-09 21:58:00]
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Re: Bittersweet Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:00:48 PM AEST
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Now that's heartbreak.
I can relate with that.
I like your ID too. Pink Floyd rox :-D

Re: Bittersweet Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:18:46 PM AEST
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m/ on pink floyd!!!! I can totally relate to this poem, my best friend recently told me that he was in love with me, and i found that i had loved him all along but i never realized it, but there's something holding me back from being wtih him....so i can relate to this...i love this poem....it's beautiful

blessed be!!!

Re: Bittersweet Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:10:39 AM AEST
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This one made me cry...I am the one on the other end who got pushed away...it hurts. :(

Very nice write!

Laurel

Re: Bittersweet Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:54:26 PM AEST
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Another piece that I relate to well... I think I'm in a different place now - but - remember this feeling well. Terrific write!

Re: Bittersweet Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:13:29 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem.

And from the eyes of one who seems to have left the other wondering......and now the other seems to wondering too.

I liked this poem, thank you for sharing.

Re: Bittersweet Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:37:24 AM AEST
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Intriging write. Very capturing. Full of emotion, a heart poured out. Neat write.

Corinna

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