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Array ( [sid] => 5136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Test [time] => 2002-10-15 19:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've tried so hard
As hard as that may be
To retain it all
An impossibility
All hope is lost
To it I will succumb
Simple in essence
Yet my mind is numb
The clock ticks on
Time draws near
The moment of truth
Met with great fear
New light has broken
as I wake and ready
not much time remains
I need to study
A ruffling as pages turn
So many words I see
I know none of which
How can this all be?
Oh how I panic...
momentary insanity
My mind is blank
I've lost my memory
Read the clock
Its time to go
Pray to God
Please let me know!
Out the door
to hell I go
The trek to school
A cold death row
The gates of hell
I pass and enter
Satan's demons meet
One was my mentor
I seek refuge
Friends to hide
Feelings of worry
we all confide
The clock strikes
Sounded by the bell
Herded we go
Locked in a cell
Alignment takes shape
Death is dispersed
The deed been done
Now we're cursed
Though at first sight
relieved by one
then two comes by
and hope is gone
I try to decifer
as questions come
Answers on my paper
sadly there are none
Two hours pass
But Im not done!
I've played with fate
but he has won... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 25 [informant] => shadowed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
The Test

Contributed by shadowed on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



I've tried so hard
As hard as that may be
To retain it all
An impossibility
All hope is lost
To it I will succumb
Simple in essence
Yet my mind is numb
The clock ticks on
Time draws near
The moment of truth
Met with great fear
New light has broken
as I wake and ready
not much time remains
I need to study
A ruffling as pages turn
So many words I see
I know none of which
How can this all be?
Oh how I panic...
momentary insanity
My mind is blank
I've lost my memory
Read the clock
Its time to go
Pray to God
Please let me know!
Out the door
to hell I go
The trek to school
A cold death row
The gates of hell
I pass and enter
Satan's demons meet
One was my mentor
I seek refuge
Friends to hide
Feelings of worry
we all confide
The clock strikes
Sounded by the bell
Herded we go
Locked in a cell
Alignment takes shape
Death is dispersed
The deed been done
Now we're cursed
Though at first sight
relieved by one
then two comes by
and hope is gone
I try to decifer
as questions come
Answers on my paper
sadly there are none
Two hours pass
But Im not done!
I've played with fate
but he has won...




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Re: The Test (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:27:12 AM AEST
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you know, a friend of mine just took the SATs and this sounds exactly like what she was going through as she was studying for the test! i'm glad she actually prepared herself and felt confident when she went in there to take the test. oi vey, that's why i started studying for school not too long ago. school before was easy, the collegiate elite have a bit more work to do. not that i'm a "smack" er smartass, i hafta study!! you should too, nifty write! kudos! ;0) -daniel


Re: The Test (User Rating: 1 )
by TigerBird81 on Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 12:53:34 AM AEST
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I am taking my exams in January and December and i know how it feels!!!! I am awful in exam conditions and that poem was spot on. Keep up the good work friend x




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