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Array ( [sid] => 51455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I couldn't think of a title [time] => 2004-06-11 15:13:14 [hometext] => This poem wasn't that great of me on expressing my feelings, I feel like I could have done better. But this will have to do. [bodytext] => I sit here and cry for the millionth time.
You hurt me when you said those horrid things.
You stand there and watch me cry, laugh about and saying how pathetic I am...
The rain can't hide my tears any more.
I long to jump up and push you far away.
But I know if I try it will just lead to another blow.
I have the bruises on my body, to prove I could never push you far enough away from me.
I stare at you and wonder how you could do this to me.
You promised you wouldn't..
Now look what you have done!
What have you become?
Was it me? Did I do this to you?
You promised you would take care of me.
I guess you meant it in another way..
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Lovely_4_Steve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I couldn't think of a title

Contributed by Lovely_4_Steve on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I sit here and cry for the millionth time.
You hurt me when you said those horrid things.
You stand there and watch me cry, laugh about and saying how pathetic I am...
The rain can't hide my tears any more.
I long to jump up and push you far away.
But I know if I try it will just lead to another blow.
I have the bruises on my body, to prove I could never push you far enough away from me.
I stare at you and wonder how you could do this to me.
You promised you wouldn't..
Now look what you have done!
What have you become?
Was it me? Did I do this to you?
You promised you would take care of me.
I guess you meant it in another way..

Copyright © Lovely_4_Steve ... [ 2004-06-11 15:13:14]
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Re: I couldn't think of a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:21:55 PM AEST
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Really good..... I liked it...... Good write

Jishes

Re: I couldn't think of a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:36:36 PM AEST
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Don't spend another second in place where you are abused. Love doesnt leave bruises my friend, at least not on the body. You expressed yourself perfectly here and if you need to talk my contact info is readily available.

Larry

Re: I couldn't think of a title (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:51:49 PM AEST
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I love the way you expressed yourself..... but.... if your being abused, you do what Larry said and run as far away as you can as fast as you can... don't waste time pushing him/her away!

I ran from the same situation, and I haven't been found.... run, dear....

Jaime

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