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House Of Rodent
Contributed by
rhei76
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I never was one to kill you
But it was fun
And I want to do it
Again
I never was one to heal you
So I left that undone
As you, I am not fixed
Awhh, then
We can build shelter
We can house the rodents
We can care together
But we won't
Cause I never wanted to kill you
But it was fun
You never tried to fix me
So all else came undone
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I wanted to love you
But you can't
Never could work thru
All this emotion I gave you
I wanted to be you
So I could heal me
But we couldn't be true
So I killed you
You took all my words
And burned them
I couldn't fix me
So we killed him
I wanted so much
But now that part of me is gone
I wanted to be happy
But those feeling were wrong
I wanted to love you
But you wouldn't help me
I wanted to be true
Then you went and killed me
I wanted you
I wanted you to be happy
I wanted you
I wanted you to fix me
We could of built our shelter
We could of housed the rodents
We could of been forever
But we won't
Copyright 2004 Eric/Feanics Pulido/Kye
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-06-11 16:56:32]
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Re: House Of Rodent
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:34:13 PM AEST
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wow, good poem, thanks for sharing...
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Re: House Of Rodent
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by buchi on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:43:52 AM AEST
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Cause I never wanted to kill you
But it was fun
wanted to love you
But you wouldn't help me
These lines are sublime...pure poetry...keep writing I like your style... |
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