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Array ( [sid] => 51478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eat [time] => 2004-06-11 18:58:22 [hometext] => When you really don't like someone and they annoy the poo out of you. [bodytext] => Eat Sh*t

I don’t like you its no surprise
I know it, you know it, and everyone else knows it
So why do you still try and talk to me like were friends
I don’t put on a pretend face like your so-called friends

Who really don’t like you but want to be in the “in crowd”
The mere sounds of your voice deafens my ears
Like a million red hot pokers all stabbing at the same time
Yet you think I should be nice to you, for you have done nothing

To deserve such generosity and compassion from the likes of me
I can barely stomach the site of you, how revolted I’ve become
It started out as only a dislike but grew to absolute disgust
I do not know why you go on acting like were friends

Our interactions should be reason enough for you to stop
But you can’t take a clue through your delusional mind
I do not like you, I most likely never will
So quit because it might end badly

It is very plain to see, that I just wanna take one hit
But I’ll settle for a wish, a wish that you would just eat ****
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 6 [informant] => KSUHO11 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Eat

Contributed by KSUHO11 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:58:22 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Eat Sh*t

I don’t like you its no surprise
I know it, you know it, and everyone else knows it
So why do you still try and talk to me like were friends
I don’t put on a pretend face like your so-called friends

Who really don’t like you but want to be in the “in crowd”
The mere sounds of your voice deafens my ears
Like a million red hot pokers all stabbing at the same time
Yet you think I should be nice to you, for you have done nothing

To deserve such generosity and compassion from the likes of me
I can barely stomach the site of you, how revolted I’ve become
It started out as only a dislike but grew to absolute disgust
I do not know why you go on acting like were friends

Our interactions should be reason enough for you to stop
But you can’t take a clue through your delusional mind
I do not like you, I most likely never will
So quit because it might end badly

It is very plain to see, that I just wanna take one hit
But I’ll settle for a wish, a wish that you would just eat ****




Copyright © KSUHO11 ... [ 2004-06-11 18:58:22]
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Re: Eat (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:14:28 PM AEST
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oh i really like this it reminds me of one of my old friends. notice i did say old friends lmao.
written well.
huggs, Brandy


Re: Eat (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:50:57 PM AEST
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Haha, nice. I loved it. And I know exactly how you feel. I know many people who act as the one your talking about in your poem. Keep up the good work though, and don't let them get the best of you. Nice write!

~Stace~


Re: Eat (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:01:57 AM AEST
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Great poem, full of raw emotion/anger.... kee em coming

pixie xx


Re: Eat (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:16:10 PM AEST
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wow, that's some angry stuff you got there. yeah, I've been in a similar situation....only that person wouldn't stop following me around....I hate it when people do that to me. Nice poem though, I enjoyed it and I can definitely relate. Good work!

~Jenna




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