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[aid] => mick
[title] => in a whisper
[time] => 2004-06-12 04:32:56
[hometext] => me thinks the birds be singin' again...
[bodytext] =>
fell fast asleep and
dreamed the sweetest dream
but then when i woke up
you were right there with me,
oh, let it remain dark
save us from light of day
these moments timeless
are we swept away?
you've been my friend
through the years
when i was down, you
kissed away my tears,
in a whisper my heart
says you know it too
but don't mention love
that stuffs never true,
in each the other's arms
is where we should stay
whatever we are it simply
will not fade to grey,
whatever this is; let's not
let it sail out of sight,
just keep me in your arms tonight.
§* *§
*|*
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[counter] => 476
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[score] => 104
[ratings] => 21
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LovePoetry
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in a whisper
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:32:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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fell fast asleep and
dreamed the sweetest dream
but then when i woke up
you were right there with me,
oh, let it remain dark
save us from light of day
these moments timeless
are we swept away?
you've been my friend
through the years
when i was down, you
kissed away my tears,
in a whisper my heart
says you know it too
but don't mention love
that stuffs never true,
in each the other's arms
is where we should stay
whatever we are it simply
will not fade to grey,
whatever this is; let's not
let it sail out of sight,
just keep me in your arms tonight.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: in a whisper
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:50:53 AM AEST
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aand a beautifull whisper it is they sing.
Yeah, I hear um singing in this write.
Awesomely beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:08:20 AM AEST
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wonderful, beautiful, amazing - really enjoyed this one - seems like it was from the heart - which is always good!!
well done!!!
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Re: in a whisper
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:14:34 AM AEST
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| This is another fine write by in my opinion one of the best encouragers on the site. |
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Re: in a whisper
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:29:50 AM AEST
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Aw I'm usually not one for corny poetry but this is sooo sweet. (Or I'm just growing up.)
just keep me in your arms tonight.
*sniffle* |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:39:57 AM AEST
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simply beautiful
Shari |
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Re: in a whisper
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:36:31 AM AEST
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I have to voice what has already been said, this is beautiful, amazing and a trully wonderful piece of work,
pixie xx |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:40:01 AM AEST
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Nessa, I hope they sing for you forever. It is time for you to hear music again in your heart.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: in a whisper
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:31:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful as always Nessa.
Amazing. |
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Re: in a whisper
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:45:35 AM AEST
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Mom!!!! I'm so happy for you and I hope it works out and..... oh! you should have told me!
This is..... hmm... *tries to find an adjective that everyone else hasn't already used* well... it's amazing... (sorry, I tried)...
Huggles and squeezes!!!!
xoxo Jaime |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:37:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I love it. Nice job.
Andrew |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:37:46 PM AEST
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Me thinks you're right!!!!
Loved this grrlfriend.....
Hugs and Woofies....
Jenni |
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Re: in a whisper
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:43:28 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwww, Nessa . . . this one's one of the best ones I've seen from you in a while. Vividly beautiful (there MUST be a better adjective, I'm sure, but it escapes me right now :P) and it's great to see such a sweet, happy, romantic one from you . . .
May those birds always sing for you :).
--Nora |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Merry on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:40:51 PM AEST
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nessa - this is truly beautiful, wistful, fragilly hopeful - - may it be all that you hope for
Hugs and Daisies for Sis
Merry |
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Re: in a whisper
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:53:09 PM AEST
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Birds definitely have been singing havent they?
Thank you for sharing, nessa.
Absolutely beautiful.
Lindsey |
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Re: in a whisper
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:03:04 PM AEST
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I'm so glad the birds are singing for you again Nessa dear.
You deserve someone to hold you in their arms............maybe not the fireworks you think? But sometimes those are the best kind. They will love you forever........and that's the very best kind of love there it!
Stay in his arms........enjoy his charms.....don't let this one get away!
love
consue |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:25:46 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem from a beautiful woman. This one is so sweet hon, great write
Hugs 'n Love
-becca |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:22:38 PM AEST
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| Lovely, honest, and... real. Love comes to us in so very many ways... sometimes there aren't fireworks - but whispers can be wonderful too. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this! |
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Re: in a whisper
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:28:53 PM AEST
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Ness, this is soft, calming, hopeful and all around one incredibly beautiful write. You deserve such happiness as this.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: in a whisper
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:38:43 PM AEST
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: in a whisper
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by venkat on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:17:46 AM AEST
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it has a feather like gentle touch to the heart .
sweet and beautiful..very nicely done...
Oh..Nessa..hugs my friend.:-) venkat |
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Re: in a whisper
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:33:19 AM AEST
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CUTE & LOVING! UM ~ I LOVED IT!! WAY TO GO NESSA!!!
LOL~DAN!!!! |
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Re: in a whisper
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by slackoffsamiam on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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| I like your poems they seem to have a way of effecting the reader, I definitely appreciate that . |
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Re: in a whisper
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by SnowB on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:15:53 AM AEST
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This is a very gentle and tender poem..very beautiful..
Lena |
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Re: in a whisper
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by WinterFox on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:11:47 AM AEST
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| Beautiful piece, nessa..I enjoyed it very much...Mike |
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Re: in a whisper
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:51:04 PM AEST
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Reading this penetrated every nerve in my body
Truly beautiful fantastic write lady I really enjoyed
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: in a whisper
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:48:15 PM AEST
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| 'Symphonically' blends purpose meaning moods, object and subject spanned just by having lived. Your poem paints for the mind's eye, sings to the psyche of the human personality |
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