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Array ( [sid] => 51592 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fate Burped [time] => 2004-06-12 17:11:50 [hometext] => This is me... my humor should come with a warning label: 'Do not drink while reading', or maybe it should be 'drink alot while reading.' [bodytext] => Fate pursed her lovely lips
took a breath of whipped abyss
She'd overindulged on some bliss
the burp she gave was like a kiss
Out you popped with a perfect twist.

Words can't really describe
what the angels had in mind
Perhaps to conjure up perfection
but now you're lost in your reflection

Hey there, ho there pretty eyes
can't you see past your own prize
This girl wants to get with ya
but your head's too swelled to fit ya

I'm not a super model or a doll
what makes me think you'd even call?
Gotta get out of this meat market,
find a nice guy sit n' park it

Dating sucks and I so hate it
Whadda ya mean you're not my blind date?

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Fate Burped

Contributed by Nightseer63 on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Fate pursed her lovely lips
took a breath of whipped abyss
She'd overindulged on some bliss
the burp she gave was like a kiss
Out you popped with a perfect twist.

Words can't really describe
what the angels had in mind
Perhaps to conjure up perfection
but now you're lost in your reflection

Hey there, ho there pretty eyes
can't you see past your own prize
This girl wants to get with ya
but your head's too swelled to fit ya

I'm not a super model or a doll
what makes me think you'd even call?
Gotta get out of this meat market,
find a nice guy sit n' park it

Dating sucks and I so hate it
Whadda ya mean you're not my blind date?

Copyright © Nightseer63 ... [ 2004-06-12 17:11:50]
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Re: Fate Burped (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
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lol ok then..Very interesting lol
had a nice good flow to it. very entertaining lol.
i liked it. keep it up.
Arden

Re: Fate Burped (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:45:55 PM AEST
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lmao i liked it..even tho i didnt get the "whadday mean ur not my blind date" part..maybe its me and my blondeness lol but other than tht i enojyed it great job

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