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Array ( [sid] => 51636 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would you care? [time] => 2004-06-12 22:14:37 [hometext] => Written about some 'friends' I once had [bodytext] => I thought my friends were true
But they just make me blue
Secrets told behind my back?
I'm tellllin' you that's just wack

Have I ever given you a reason not to trust?
I never spilled your secrets of hate or lust
You were the ones I trusted most
But are my feelings like a ghost?
You didn't see, nor think, nor care
But when you were upset I was there
So if I died right here, right now
If after this poem was my final bow
Would you have noticed?
Would you have cared?
Or were we friends because you were dared?

I may not live as long as you
But at least I can say, as a friend, I was true
I never spoke about you, never left you out
I always showed you kindness; what friendship's all about

These secrets that you kept from me
Hurt worse than insults from an enemy
So I ask you once again
Would you care if I were dead? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Would you care?

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I thought my friends were true
But they just make me blue
Secrets told behind my back?
I'm tellllin' you that's just wack

Have I ever given you a reason not to trust?
I never spilled your secrets of hate or lust
You were the ones I trusted most
But are my feelings like a ghost?
You didn't see, nor think, nor care
But when you were upset I was there
So if I died right here, right now
If after this poem was my final bow
Would you have noticed?
Would you have cared?
Or were we friends because you were dared?

I may not live as long as you
But at least I can say, as a friend, I was true
I never spoke about you, never left you out
I always showed you kindness; what friendship's all about

These secrets that you kept from me
Hurt worse than insults from an enemy
So I ask you once again
Would you care if I were dead?

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-06-12 22:14:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Would you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:21:55 PM AEST
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Initially I read this poem bec. you have the same name as I do. It is odd in a way bec. I never knew there was another Kie on the site. Anyway...

Lots of anger in this poem. You have a writing ability and I see it in your words. The good friendships won't leave you feeling this way and I hope you find a great friend one day who isn't the way you described in your poem.

Re: Would you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:33:02 PM AEST
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WOW!!! you tell me you didn think that your poems were good...thats b-s lol honestly this one was filled with a lot of anger and hatred toward your "friends" I hope I wasnt one you hated...lol but yeah this was has a lot of emotion and feling in it that makes it powerful...I loved it...
much love,
Dani

Re: Would you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:08:04 PM AEST
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Nices

Re: Would you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:54:20 AM AEST
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Great poem, you have a real talent

pixie xx

Re: Would you care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:45:22 PM AEST
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great write i dont have many friend that i can call good friend so yea never really had the problem

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