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Array ( [sid] => 51802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chances [time] => 2004-06-13 23:31:33 [hometext] => I thought up a few lines in the car and went on from there, PLEASE leave COMMMENTS and tell me what you think! :-) [bodytext] => You used to be so true,
Baby, it used to be just me and you,
But then you looked her way,
And me, boy, you looked away,
Why can't things stay the same,
Why do they always have to change,
It don't matter what I do,
It won't matter unless it's with you...

Were you even aware you were letting me go,
Were you even going to let me know,
When you were hitting on this, whatever it is,
This no-class, no style, no nothing chit-tis,
When she smiled and looked at you,
Were you all ready to call her your boo?
Baby, we're through!

I sit at home,
Babe, I disconnectted that phone,
Don't wanna take that call,
Please, I don't wanna take you back at all,
I was just your toy until that "thing" came along,
You don't remember me,
You don't remember our song.

Do you even remember a thing,
Or is your mind scrambled,
Just thinking "Ka-Ching",
When you come back to Earth,
Baby your done, I hope you eat turf,
You had a last chance,
And you let it go,
Baby, guess what,
This time I say "NO!" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => LiLTor878 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Chances

Contributed by LiLTor878 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:31:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You used to be so true,
Baby, it used to be just me and you,
But then you looked her way,
And me, boy, you looked away,
Why can't things stay the same,
Why do they always have to change,
It don't matter what I do,
It won't matter unless it's with you...

Were you even aware you were letting me go,
Were you even going to let me know,
When you were hitting on this, whatever it is,
This no-class, no style, no nothing chit-tis,
When she smiled and looked at you,
Were you all ready to call her your boo?
Baby, we're through!

I sit at home,
Babe, I disconnectted that phone,
Don't wanna take that call,
Please, I don't wanna take you back at all,
I was just your toy until that "thing" came along,
You don't remember me,
You don't remember our song.

Do you even remember a thing,
Or is your mind scrambled,
Just thinking "Ka-Ching",
When you come back to Earth,
Baby your done, I hope you eat turf,
You had a last chance,
And you let it go,
Baby, guess what,
This time I say "NO!"




Copyright © LiLTor878 ... [ 2004-06-13 23:31:33]
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Re: Chances (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:26:01 AM AEST
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Good write,. I can relate, I went out with someone a couple times, and just about everytime, i was cheated on,. and i really need to learn to say no when she wants to go back out with me. I liked the words you used to describe this.


-Amber


Re: Chances (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:51:11 AM AEST
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It really hurts to be cheated on. But you'll find that special guy some day.


Re: Chances (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:06:34 AM AEST
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awwww i'm sorry for your pain..... great poem, you worded the pain well.... hope that one day you find the man you deserve.....

pixie xx




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