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Array ( [sid] => 51819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you were wrong when you said it will get better [time] => 2004-06-14 01:27:40 [hometext] => I hate being lied to....***** it.... [bodytext] => you made me feel like *****
I just said ***** it
I cant take this much pressure
I hate the way you pretend everything is ok
why dont you kill me???
oh wait I'll do it for you
Ill pop some pills
slice my wrist
in all hopes you will get *****
I deserve this...
I give up
this is it...
my glorious ending
It was my heart I was lending
I take it back
knowing you
you'll tear it apart
I hate acting perfect
I want to see your face
how you'll react
Ill tie you down
and make you watch
tie a rop around my neck...
and end it...
my heart was so pure
my thoughts were so real
I dont see why you didnt stay
did you need the looks
I had the charm...
I read books
I caused no harm
Ill jump of the roof into
the shallow end of the pool
Ill pull the trigger
while standing on a one legged stool
Ill do all this because you lied
and said everything will get better [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
you were wrong when you said it will get better

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:27:40 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



you made me feel like *****
I just said ***** it
I cant take this much pressure
I hate the way you pretend everything is ok
why dont you kill me???
oh wait I'll do it for you
Ill pop some pills
slice my wrist
in all hopes you will get *****
I deserve this...
I give up
this is it...
my glorious ending
It was my heart I was lending
I take it back
knowing you
you'll tear it apart
I hate acting perfect
I want to see your face
how you'll react
Ill tie you down
and make you watch
tie a rop around my neck...
and end it...
my heart was so pure
my thoughts were so real
I dont see why you didnt stay
did you need the looks
I had the charm...
I read books
I caused no harm
Ill jump of the roof into
the shallow end of the pool
Ill pull the trigger
while standing on a one legged stool
Ill do all this because you lied
and said everything will get better




Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-14 01:27:40]
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Re: you were wrong when you said it will get better (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:31:30 AM AEST
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ya I know they always say that it'll get better...it never does tho for me. strong words here. I know how you feel, sometimes I wish I could just show here the pain, the hurt she left behind. so she would understand. great job A++++


Re: you were wrong when you said it will get better (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:49:02 AM AEST
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Wow! Very powerful poem! A lot of anger was put into that poem. Good write.


Re: you were wrong when you said it will get better (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:06:29 AM AEST
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hey,
it's me.....well,this is a depressing and also good poem.i'm always here you know,love ya.
love always,
andrea


Re: you were wrong when you said it will get better (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:39:48 AM AEST
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whoa..some strong feelings in here...i know the feeling of having ppl say it will get better but it never does..stay strong though

luv always


Re: you were wrong when you said it will get better (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:02:15 PM AEST
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many strong pure emotions.. nice piece.. AMI JO




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