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Look Around Daddy!!
Contributed by
Britty
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:41:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Look Around Daddy
You put me threw so
much ***** thats not how
my childhood was supposed to be
I sit up at night and wonder
Mabey I could have been a better
daughter then you wouldnt have left me
So much pain.
Look Aroun Daddy
I thought you were my hero
I thought just MABEY we could have worked things out
But NO! You had to leave
me alone in this world, alone to deal!
How could you do this to me?!
Why the hell did you have
to go and kill yourself?!
Tears of blood run down my face
as I look back at all the *****ty memories!
You doing drugs, neglecting your family
you kids, your wife
On the most important day of your life
you made a commitment to my mother,
that you would be a loving husband, a loving father.
So what happend?
Copyright ©
Britty
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2004-06-14 12:41:37]
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Re: Look Around Daddy!!
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by purplestary on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:10:29 PM AEST
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| it must of been incredibly hard for you to write this. you did a great job and expressed it well. i liked this alot. verry sad but amazing write. |
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