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self destruction
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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my soul rips in two
tears of crimson pain
splash down my shaking form
i search for the answer
the end if all this
god flavored *****
my tears slice through
the empty darkness
my empty life
i ache to hurt myself
to draw the blade
across my eager flesh
my uncontrolable emotions
the thin ribbon of red
tiny ruby blossons
i long to shed much more
i'm so scared
of what comes next
of what i might do
to who it might happen
i almost wish you weren't here
i don't want to hurt you
yet i'm so close
to self-destruction
i want it so bad
i need to find an easy way
out of all this hate and
pity
so unstable
i haven't been here
in a long long time
even before you
you'll see me snap
there's so many ways to die
if you don't care for the
people that matter
i'm staying sane for you too
the things i'm
not allowed to see
the thing that threatens
to kill
don't you see that i
shouldn't be allowed to care
i drag too much pain
behind me
cause too much worry
i lift the gleaming blade
begin to slice the skin
blood flows, the cut is made
i sit and wait for the end
Copyright ©
MDodgen
... [
2004-06-14 14:42:52]
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Re: self destruction
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:45:16 PM AEST
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| wow, tht is VERY well written...and i kno how it feels like, so if u wanana tlk im here, anyways bak to ur poetry, it tells a story its soo good, great job |
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Re: self destruction
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:27:19 AM AEST
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| your words flow well here, its a sad poem but written well. A+++ |
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Re: self destruction
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:33:18 PM AEST
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| that said a lot of how i feel right now. good job writing it. |
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