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tears pour out of a young girls eyes
pain is felt by both upset parties
feuding continues within the family
she feels she has no loving father
jealous of everyone else who does
he wishes he could change her
make her like his other daughter
mom wants to change it all around
wants a loving caring happy family
sister watches not sure what to think
loves both sides yet hates the words
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Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

angry words explode into the air
tears pour out of a young girls eyes
pain is felt by both upset parties
feuding continues within the family
she feels she has no loving father
jealous of everyone else who does
he wishes he could change her
make her like his other daughter
mom wants to change it all around
wants a loving caring happy family
sister watches not sure what to think
loves both sides yet hates the words
violence rips the family to pieces

Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-06-14 15:43:13]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:55:49 PM AEST
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Good poem. I don't get alone with my parents very well either. I do better now than I did when I was little. They physically and verbally abused me throughout my life until i could finally stand up for myself. Hope you find a way to have a better relationship with your family. Peace

Natalie

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by purplestary on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:23:12 PM AEST
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sorry to hear about that..this was a good write..had to be difficult to write. me and my mom get along alot better now that i moved out. i hope you can find a way to make things better between your family though...i wish me and my mom could of worked it out before my moving out...instead of me moving being the solution like it was...

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by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:24:52 PM AEST
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The words here are so sad, yet I know the pain, Its taken my dad 22 years to finally speak to me again, he became very ill and asked for me now he calls everynight, I hope soon you will find peace, and be yourself, you don't have to please others to have a great relationship, peace I hope for you, take care Val

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:20:11 PM AEST
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very sad......... hugs n' love nessa

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