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[sid] => 51927
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Facade
[time] => 2004-06-14 17:19:43
[hometext] => Ok, I want to thank Rita... though she probably doesn't know why... On one of my poems she left a comment about facades... and it inspired this poem...
[bodytext] => I'm the one nobody knows.
I'm the one that never shows.
There is two of us inside,
And I'm the one that runs to hide.
She's the one, and she's all wrong,
She's the one you think is strong.
She's the facade that you all see,
When you think you're looking at me.
She's the one who lives my life,
She's the one that gave up my knife.
She's the one, and day by day,
She's killing me, in her own way.
She's the act that I put on,
It's to her that you are drawn.
She's the facade you all see,
Why can't she just leave me be?
I'm the one that cries at night,
I'm the one that needs a light.
I'm am here and I want out,
Yet I can not even shout.
I am this body's only soul,
This charade is having its toll.
She's the facade that you all see,
Everyday she becomes more real than me.
Jaime Moran
June 13, 2004
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 703
[topic] => 61
[informant] => yellow_sundragon
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 30
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
)
Facade
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yellow_sundragon
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm the one nobody knows.
I'm the one that never shows.
There is two of us inside,
And I'm the one that runs to hide.
She's the one, and she's all wrong,
She's the one you think is strong.
She's the facade that you all see,
When you think you're looking at me.
She's the one who lives my life,
She's the one that gave up my knife.
She's the one, and day by day,
She's killing me, in her own way.
She's the act that I put on,
It's to her that you are drawn.
She's the facade you all see,
Why can't she just leave me be?
I'm the one that cries at night,
I'm the one that needs a light.
I'm am here and I want out,
Yet I can not even shout.
I am this body's only soul,
This charade is having its toll.
She's the facade that you all see,
Everyday she becomes more real than me.
Jaime Moran
June 13, 2004
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Re: Facade
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:35:16 PM AEST
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oh jaime sweetie, this is a powerful, beautifully written outstanding poem!!! wow and wow, sooo good, you know i loves ya, big huggles, nessa xxx...
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Re: Facade
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by Archie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:37:20 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem. Inspiration comes from many sources |
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Re: Facade
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:41:25 PM AEST
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Hey sweetness; we all have facades. Some of us have several. You must choose which person you truly want to be. In my life I had to incorporate 2 to make 1. Choose the one you feel to be the strongest and most effectual in your life and step into that one. Life can be tough at times, as you know, so always choose the one with emotional strength. You will be fine. It is a part of growing up, working through the angst and finding a spot in life where you feel safe and comfortable. I am always here if you ever just want to talk.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Facade
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by Seans_Girl on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 06:32:59 PM AEST
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Very unique and cool poem. Keep up the good work.
~*Natalie*~ |
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Re: Facade
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:01:30 PM AEST
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| so many of us can relate to that poem.. but ur the one that wrote it so well.. u did a really nice job.. AMI JO |
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Re: Facade
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:05:34 PM AEST
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| bellisima! |
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Re: Facade
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:41:43 AM AEST
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Dammit Jaime this is beyond excellent! Beyond beautiful...just wow! I don't know what to say, but I do know this is one of the best poems I have read in a long while and it's going on the special poems section in the forums right now!
*Huggles*
Your sis
- Becca |
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Re: Facade
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:03:05 AM AEST
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wow, what can I say, this is amazingly written, wahey to Rita for giving you some inspiration,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Facade
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:33:31 AM AEST
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This is terrific! I really like the way that you chose to present it. There are many here that understand what it is to have a facade, to wear a mask, to exist behind a self built wall... so many have felt the need to do so (poetry, maybe, is a part of that as well). I'm so very delighted that many of us (yes... us - myself included) seem to be peeking out from behind it all lately. Your 'peek' was just beautiful.
Quite impressed,
~ SNM
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Re: Facade
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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She's killing me, in her own way.
I love that line!!! This is awesome, I'm gonna go check out your page now to see if you've posted anything else I've missed. I hate when that happens. This is a great write and it speaks so much truth.
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