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Array ( [sid] => 51990 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All hope was lost [time] => 2004-06-15 00:35:34 [hometext] => True stuff...not so good though...lol [bodytext] => you made me turn
to the silver edge
pushed me right
over the ledge
all hope was lost
without any cost
you turned your back
all cuz you couldn't hack,
our intense "love"
you gave me that
rough, emotional shove
you didn't want us to be we
now I cant find a way
to come out and be me
I popped a few pills
in hopes that it kills
I fell to the floor
I hit my head on the door
I woke up
in a hospital bed
I hated myself
cuz I wasn't dead
I felt stupid for trying
and not ever dying
I put my hands over my eyes
and heavily
I started crying
you walked in the room
willing to take me back
I just looked up at you
in disgust
and repeated to you
all hope was lost
we couldn't be us [comments] => 6 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

All hope was lost

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:35:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

you made me turn
to the silver edge
pushed me right
over the ledge
all hope was lost
without any cost
you turned your back
all cuz you couldn't hack,
our intense "love"
you gave me that
rough, emotional shove
you didn't want us to be we
now I cant find a way
to come out and be me
I popped a few pills
in hopes that it kills
I fell to the floor
I hit my head on the door
I woke up
in a hospital bed
I hated myself
cuz I wasn't dead
I felt stupid for trying
and not ever dying
I put my hands over my eyes
and heavily
I started crying
you walked in the room
willing to take me back
I just looked up at you
in disgust
and repeated to you
all hope was lost
we couldn't be us

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-15 00:35:34]
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Re: All hope was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 01:18:59 AM AEST
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hello!
well,very sad.in other words,good stuff and i'ts a very emotional poem.nice one.
love always,
andrea

Re: All hope was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:17:11 AM AEST
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im glad you still here to share these wonderful poems with us. very sad write, you express it well. A++++

Re: All hope was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:54:33 AM AEST
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Truely awesome write...yeah, I've been there to many times to count...you know "on the edge" and I've been pushed over too many times, but I never took the plunge at the bottom... and sometimes thats a good thing, I promise.

Re: All hope was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:53:08 AM AEST
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I think this is very good , you can feal the rushed panic of the emotions

Vanessa ( 090404 )

Re: All hope was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:20:52 PM AEST
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you have told of your pain so well, I know how you are feeling, please dont ever stop sharing your poems with us all at YPDC

takecvare

Pixie xx

Re: All hope was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:00:19 PM AEST
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very touching.. ive had something along these lines happen to me.. its a slap in a face when they only wanna be with you after your hurt.. AMI JO

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