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Array ( [sid] => 52104 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Touched My Heart [time] => 2004-06-15 16:23:22 [hometext] => i wrote this about me...i know he loves me...... [bodytext] => you climb in through the window
my prince
i feel like a princess
repunzell
you smiled at me
oo my heart melted
you look away
i come back alive again
your eyes
i could feel them watching me
they shone out so much love
i thought they would burst
you held me close to your body
i could feel the warmth and love
and your rhythm
bum-bum-bum-bum
my lips seem to find yours
and were locked together
i feel a tear
and i cry too
iam so happy
are you too?
i sit down and you stroke my hair
how interested you look with my body
but you cannot have it
i know you yearn
and i love you for holding back
im just not ready to show myself
havent i shown enough
my heart is me
flesh and blood dont matter
do you feel this way too?
you must do because you move a little away
thank you...
i lay down
you besides me
you whisper to me
words that mean so much
to delicate for any one else to hear
my words alone
my secret rainbow
to remember on a rainy day
i touch your face
and you look away?
you turn back round and give me the biggest hug
my heart jumps
i hear a door go
he looks at me
and kisses me one last time
i whisper
goodbye my love
goodbye forever
no he says
goodbye my love yes
but not goodbye forever
i will be in here
and thats when he touched my heart
.........forever




[comments] => 3 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
Touched My Heart

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



you climb in through the window
my prince
i feel like a princess
repunzell
you smiled at me
oo my heart melted
you look away
i come back alive again
your eyes
i could feel them watching me
they shone out so much love
i thought they would burst
you held me close to your body
i could feel the warmth and love
and your rhythm
bum-bum-bum-bum
my lips seem to find yours
and were locked together
i feel a tear
and i cry too
iam so happy
are you too?
i sit down and you stroke my hair
how interested you look with my body
but you cannot have it
i know you yearn
and i love you for holding back
im just not ready to show myself
havent i shown enough
my heart is me
flesh and blood dont matter
do you feel this way too?
you must do because you move a little away
thank you...
i lay down
you besides me
you whisper to me
words that mean so much
to delicate for any one else to hear
my words alone
my secret rainbow
to remember on a rainy day
i touch your face
and you look away?
you turn back round and give me the biggest hug
my heart jumps
i hear a door go
he looks at me
and kisses me one last time
i whisper
goodbye my love
goodbye forever
no he says
goodbye my love yes
but not goodbye forever
i will be in here
and thats when he touched my heart
.........forever








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Re: Touched My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:33:24 PM AEST
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sweetly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Touched My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by jmt25607 on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:35:27 PM AEST
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aaaawwwwwww that is so sweet i love the poem and if its true i hope you to stay together always even if its only in your hearts aawwww...jess


Re: Touched My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:47:24 PM AEST
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This made me smile. Full of soft caresses of the heart and subtle strokes of the imagination. Well done, bravo!

Laurie




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