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Array ( [sid] => 52106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Must Be The Following.... [time] => 2004-06-15 16:31:42 [hometext] => I was feelin a bit happy for a change, threw on some bach, and look what i wrote : ) enjoy, comments appreciataed [bodytext] =>

With me
my love must be..

a certain set of rules
a must definitive guide line

i must love have her heart
i hope she'll keep mine

we should be perfect
we should never argue

people must look down on us
people should never know of our intemate pleasure

we should kiss every moment
we should remember every good point
we must forget all the problems

i should be there for you always
i know you would do the same
i hope you would understand me

for there should never be a doubt
for a million reasons a second i could think of why i love you
for the day that'll come when we both say yes

please never dissapoint
please never look down
please never make me feel stupid
please let me remember you for always
please do nothing but the same for me


for to have you would be my greatest possesion, crafted from our souls, and breathe life upon us two for the rest of our day together, i know we will fight, i know we will have our differences, but I will know we will love each other, to forget petty ownership.
My love must be the previuos
My happiness will be infinate
My security will be Omniverous
My soul shall be for ever yours [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 2 [informant] => 01_zanzebar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Love Must Be The Following....

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





With me
my love must be..

a certain set of rules
a must definitive guide line

i must love have her heart
i hope she'll keep mine

we should be perfect
we should never argue

people must look down on us
people should never know of our intemate pleasure

we should kiss every moment
we should remember every good point
we must forget all the problems

i should be there for you always
i know you would do the same
i hope you would understand me

for there should never be a doubt
for a million reasons a second i could think of why i love you
for the day that'll come when we both say yes

please never dissapoint
please never look down
please never make me feel stupid
please let me remember you for always
please do nothing but the same for me


for to have you would be my greatest possesion, crafted from our souls, and breathe life upon us two for the rest of our day together, i know we will fight, i know we will have our differences, but I will know we will love each other, to forget petty ownership.
My love must be the previuos
My happiness will be infinate
My security will be Omniverous
My soul shall be for ever yours




Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-06-15 16:31:42]
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Re: Love Must Be The Following.... (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:36:05 PM AEST
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nice structure, an overall good poem


Re: Love Must Be The Following.... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:47:53 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Love Must Be The Following.... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:24:44 AM AEST
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Finally found you Roan, and I too like Bach!
I see you love classical music....I do also play the piano and organ.
This poem was pleasantly true, and idealistic, but practical too. When two people come together......they are still individuals...with different minds. Fleshly together, but different personalities. You have the right defination of love......and if you find someone that loves you as much......everything will be just fine.
This was a beautiful write.
And thank you so much for commenting on my poem.
Lovingcritters
ConSue


Re: Love Must Be The Following.... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:36:43 AM AEST
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great poem,

pixie xx




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