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Array ( [sid] => 52167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Musical Apology [time] => 2004-06-16 00:48:41 [hometext] => this is just off the top of my head.... [bodytext] => Every rose has its thorn,
So goes the song by Poison....
I think I've found more than one
In my life.
If life can be considered a rose,
Then obstacles are thorns,
And the thorns are aplenty in mine....

Kid Rock tells me
Only God knows why,
And I think we have that in common....
Smoking my cigarette,
Wishing I hadn't screwed up
All that I had....
Proof that I'm still young and think I know it all,
But I didn't know how good I had it....

Everything I do, I do it for you,
Just like Bryan Adams sang,
But sometimes I don't do
Exactly what I intend to do....
But I try to do
Anything and everything to keep your love....

I've had the best of intentions,
Just as did Travis Tritt,
But I didn't expect the pain I'd cause
When I didn't
Think my plan all the way through.

So please forgive me,
I know not what I do,
( more Bryan Adams)
Until I've done it and see that I've hurt you....
And it hurts me
To see you cry when I ruin everything
The way I always seem to do....

Thanks to all the artists named
For the songs they performed
And inspired me
To write this
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Musical Apology

Contributed by Solmyr1404 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:48:41 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Every rose has its thorn,
So goes the song by Poison....
I think I've found more than one
In my life.
If life can be considered a rose,
Then obstacles are thorns,
And the thorns are aplenty in mine....

Kid Rock tells me
Only God knows why,
And I think we have that in common....
Smoking my cigarette,
Wishing I hadn't screwed up
All that I had....
Proof that I'm still young and think I know it all,
But I didn't know how good I had it....

Everything I do, I do it for you,
Just like Bryan Adams sang,
But sometimes I don't do
Exactly what I intend to do....
But I try to do
Anything and everything to keep your love....

I've had the best of intentions,
Just as did Travis Tritt,
But I didn't expect the pain I'd cause
When I didn't
Think my plan all the way through.

So please forgive me,
I know not what I do,
( more Bryan Adams)
Until I've done it and see that I've hurt you....
And it hurts me
To see you cry when I ruin everything
The way I always seem to do....

Thanks to all the artists named
For the songs they performed
And inspired me
To write this
Apology....

Copyright © Solmyr1404 ... [ 2004-06-16 00:48:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Musical Apology (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:32:12 AM AEST
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i think most of us have the "rose problem"
and I liked the musical mentions
but
keep your head high
may you always be strong of heart
and know that you are loved

Kaila

Re: Musical Apology (User Rating: 1 )
by xtreme_emotions on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:46:52 AM AEST
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Bryan, you shouldn't blame yourself...I think we both screwed up...I wrote a poem for you, so you might wanna check it out...maybe it'll help set your mind at ease. At the moment it's the only one I've posted, but in case I post another before you get around to reading it, it's called Wishful Thinking...I love you, but I know you'll be a lot happier with Dez...that's just how it is.

Love,
Melina

Re: Musical Apology (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:46:53 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. again i'm sorry that things have happened to u to make u write an appology poem. it's hard sometimes to just live life. just try to move on and then life will get better. nice poem, and again if u ever just want to talk, i am here to talk. any time. keep up the good work with ur writing.
~allyson~

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