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in the middle of the night
to find im not there
then you know i loved you
once before
now im gone to save you
from myself
please please forgive me
im all alone
though i sacrificied myself to save you
now im scared
and all alone
i was longing to stay
and grow old with you
but fate cannot be wrong
can it?
the hag whispered my death to me
and it wasnt here with you
i have to stop myself from killing
dying over this sin
though i bleed i bleed
over you
its worth the pain and suffering
i know you wont cry for my absence
but i will for you
ill bleed
ill cry
ill die for you
i know you might for me?
though i knew you loved me
i loved you too
now...im all alone
missing you
i love you
i know you cant hear me
and im sorry
please please forgive me
im all alone......

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

All Alone

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

if you wake
in the middle of the night
to find im not there
then you know i loved you
once before
now im gone to save you
from myself
please please forgive me
im all alone
though i sacrificied myself to save you
now im scared
and all alone
i was longing to stay
and grow old with you
but fate cannot be wrong
can it?
the hag whispered my death to me
and it wasnt here with you
i have to stop myself from killing
dying over this sin
though i bleed i bleed
over you
its worth the pain and suffering
i know you wont cry for my absence
but i will for you
ill bleed
ill cry
ill die for you
i know you might for me?
though i knew you loved me
i loved you too
now...im all alone
missing you
i love you
i know you cant hear me
and im sorry
please please forgive me
im all alone......

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-06-16 13:19:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:27:52 PM AEST
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this is so sad, very moving, but you have expressed it so well, great write

pixie xx

Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by bluedragonfly on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:40:54 PM AEST
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this is very powerful with strong emotion.

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