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Array ( [sid] => 52253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want whats mine! [time] => 2004-06-16 18:16:44 [hometext] => i finally did it..i got out alot of things i have wanted to say to my parents for as long as i can remember! and i'm taking everything they took from me back! [bodytext] => burried deep within this place
it's time to get out
time to take what is mine
my self esteme, my opinion

dad, you never wanted me
mom, you only tied me up
you both made me feel like ****
and you both stole so much away

I know i have a long way to go
but i know now that i can
i'm stealing my dignity back
and i'm shutting you both out of me

It's MY soul.
It's MY heart.
you can't break it anymore.
you can't hurt me again.

I'm older now
and i'm fighting back
give my life back to me!
you can't have it!

despite what you think,
believe it or not
i was never yours!
and now i'm saying how i feel

I'm telling you both
what i needed to say
years and years ago
It's mine! it's mine! it's mine!!!

there was a time
i could of shared
but forget you both!
it's far too late for that.

so this is me
i'm moving on
i'm taking my feelings back
i'm taking eyes back

i'm taking my ears back as well
i'm tired of being deaf
i'm taking my nose away from you
you both have one of your own

i'm packing my heart away in a box
and my soul is in a bag
i'm walking away from this
i'm digging myself out of this whole.

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I want whats mine!

Contributed by purplestary on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:16:44 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



burried deep within this place
it's time to get out
time to take what is mine
my self esteme, my opinion

dad, you never wanted me
mom, you only tied me up
you both made me feel like ****
and you both stole so much away

I know i have a long way to go
but i know now that i can
i'm stealing my dignity back
and i'm shutting you both out of me

It's MY soul.
It's MY heart.
you can't break it anymore.
you can't hurt me again.

I'm older now
and i'm fighting back
give my life back to me!
you can't have it!

despite what you think,
believe it or not
i was never yours!
and now i'm saying how i feel

I'm telling you both
what i needed to say
years and years ago
It's mine! it's mine! it's mine!!!

there was a time
i could of shared
but forget you both!
it's far too late for that.

so this is me
i'm moving on
i'm taking my feelings back
i'm taking eyes back

i'm taking my ears back as well
i'm tired of being deaf
i'm taking my nose away from you
you both have one of your own

i'm packing my heart away in a box
and my soul is in a bag
i'm walking away from this
i'm digging myself out of this whole.





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Re: I want whats mine! (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfwynd on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:48:55 PM AEST
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great write, very emotional. I know what its like to be at war with your parents - I'm in the same boat. My mother still treats me like I'm 5 and I'm sick of it *sigh* - still, great work! xx


Re: I want whats mine! (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:53:37 PM AEST
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Thjat poem was very deep. I can image how you feel and hang in there for me okay.-luckycharm.


Re: I want whats mine! (User Rating: 1 )
by WereCat on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:07:45 PM AEST
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Great poem! And good for you sweetheart! I have a feeling that now you are free to figure out who you are and what you want, we are going to see some amazing things from you as you are an amazing person.

-Cat


Re: I want whats mine! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:27:21 PM AEST
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i was at odds with my parents too, but now that they are grandparents they all behave lol, hang in there, this is a beatifully written heartfelt poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I want whats mine! (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:13:36 AM AEST
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very deep and well written,

pixie xx


Re: I want whats mine! (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:05:08 PM AEST
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YAY! YAY!! *claps real hard and helps you pack* I'm SOOOOO happy for you!!!!!!!!!!

This is a great poem! Can I borrow it?? I think it's high time my mom got it...

Jaime




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