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Array ( [sid] => 52434 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead [time] => 2004-06-17 16:25:36 [hometext] => meh...whateva.......................................................comment if you want....i dont think you care...no one dose....................................... [bodytext] => torn apart
ripped away
taken so fast
gone in the blink of an eye

they took you from me
tore you from my side
and now here i lie
broken and dead

nothing left to have
nothing left to give
im just alone
alone and dead

i have had enought of this life
now is the time
time for me to spread my wings
to take flight and never come back

dont sue me for being suicidal
no one cant be happy and perky 24/7
so here i stay
dead inside for the rest of my days

i should go now
what is there to live for
im just a usless person with usless qualities
i should just go and banish my worthless body to hell evermore

he was my lover
the only love i ever knew
he was the only thing that kept me alive
but now thanks to your trechery hes gone

banished from me till the end of time
he is alive i know he is
but we just cant be together
we cant..

why can we not be together
what is stopping us
what can stop love
no one can stop love no one can stop true love

love is a bond
it is formed and can over come anyhthing
can it over come death
could it over come death

death is what i have been reduced to
nothing but a crying helpless soul
scrarred and torn
ripped at the seams

crying and bleeding on my bed
some how i am breathing
breathing through this hardened skin
skin that has been scratched and clawed at in hopes of flow

i need to be saved
saved from myself and the torture i cause myself
how i constantly beat myself up
and kill myself slowly

they took your love
your everlasting comfort from my side
banished me to hell within myself
i claw my eyes shut and pray for death

dead inside
dead on the outside [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Dead

Contributed by TwEeK on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:25:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



torn apart
ripped away
taken so fast
gone in the blink of an eye

they took you from me
tore you from my side
and now here i lie
broken and dead

nothing left to have
nothing left to give
im just alone
alone and dead

i have had enought of this life
now is the time
time for me to spread my wings
to take flight and never come back

dont sue me for being suicidal
no one cant be happy and perky 24/7
so here i stay
dead inside for the rest of my days

i should go now
what is there to live for
im just a usless person with usless qualities
i should just go and banish my worthless body to hell evermore

he was my lover
the only love i ever knew
he was the only thing that kept me alive
but now thanks to your trechery hes gone

banished from me till the end of time
he is alive i know he is
but we just cant be together
we cant..

why can we not be together
what is stopping us
what can stop love
no one can stop love no one can stop true love

love is a bond
it is formed and can over come anyhthing
can it over come death
could it over come death

death is what i have been reduced to
nothing but a crying helpless soul
scrarred and torn
ripped at the seams

crying and bleeding on my bed
some how i am breathing
breathing through this hardened skin
skin that has been scratched and clawed at in hopes of flow

i need to be saved
saved from myself and the torture i cause myself
how i constantly beat myself up
and kill myself slowly

they took your love
your everlasting comfort from my side
banished me to hell within myself
i claw my eyes shut and pray for death

dead inside
dead on the outside




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-06-17 16:25:36]
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Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:50:47 PM AEST
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wow that was very powerful, I loved this....its totally something I can relate to...and thats all I really write about...but you know hopefully things will get better...well I loved this keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want, Id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani


Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:22:31 PM AEST
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the opening and endings are reallypowerful, as is the rest. and the subjet was ver gud.
i know you dn't think anyone cares and the chances are no1 n yourl ife really does now that the one who did love you is gone but i guess in time......if you last hat long that you'll find omeone else, i know this is going to ound incredibly patronsing because i hate it when people offer this to me but if you want you can add me on msn or yahoo and we can talk, even if its jut general chat.
remember people will always care......even if it is through obligation.


Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by creed on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:09:46 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem as well. I've tried to commit suicide numerous times and use to think about it alot. I lost my boyfriend..well, I didnt "lose" him, but he got sent off to California and I live in Oklahoma. So, I cant see him. I hate it, and I wish he were here...but I know that I will somehow make it through this. Suicide's not the answer. I've figured that out. I liked the poem though, it's really good. I use to think that nobody cared about me also. Now, I take the time to think about my friends and family and I realize that people do care. Even if its not always obvious.




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