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Array ( [sid] => 52512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why must it b so hard? [time] => 2004-06-18 01:11:31 [hometext] => just another. take it as you will [bodytext] => I loved hearing your voice,
I loved feeling your skin.
I loved holding you close to me,
I cried when it came to an end.

If God made love,
and made it true.
Then why does he allow heartbreak,
and make us feel blue.

I see you everyday,
with your beauty and grace.
I try to smile and play it off,
but I die standing their in my place.
staring at you and your beutiful face

I remember when I held you close,
so close I could feel you breathing.
But now I cant hold you close,
and my heart is torn out, bleeding.

My life is nothing,
nothing without you.
All of our memories,
is all I can hold onto. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Why must it b so hard?

Contributed by socialmisfit on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:11:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I loved hearing your voice,
I loved feeling your skin.
I loved holding you close to me,
I cried when it came to an end.

If God made love,
and made it true.
Then why does he allow heartbreak,
and make us feel blue.

I see you everyday,
with your beauty and grace.
I try to smile and play it off,
but I die standing their in my place.
staring at you and your beutiful face

I remember when I held you close,
so close I could feel you breathing.
But now I cant hold you close,
and my heart is torn out, bleeding.

My life is nothing,
nothing without you.
All of our memories,
is all I can hold onto.

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2004-06-18 01:11:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Why must it b so hard? (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:45:05 AM AEST
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I relate to this a lot actually its scary...I loved this write made me cry because it made me think back to my relationship I once had and its just really depressing...I loved this write lots of emotion and feeling...very powerful....MASTERPIECE!!!!
read and comment mine if you want, I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani

Re: Why must it b so hard? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:51:25 AM AEST
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lovely poem, very touching, you have written it great

pixie xx

Re: Why must it b so hard? (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:20:06 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. It's like when your really in love with a person and they break your heart, it's hard for the feelings to leave you for some reason. Hang in there and know that things will be okay. You just have to believe.-luckycharm.

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