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Array ( [sid] => 52588 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hide yourself from all to see [time] => 2004-06-18 14:38:08 [hometext] => a few people have read this and been confused bout who im talkin bout.. so the whole time the person im describing is myself [bodytext] => everywhere i look i see you staring back at me
i turn my head i close my eyes but i cant get away
your always there following my every step my every
move
im sick of seeing such pure ugliness but you wont
leave
i look up at the reflective glass and cry from you
there you are the ruler of all my nightmares
your ugly eyes peer back into mine taunting me
every move i make you copy showing how ugly you are
people say they like your appearance how you look
i cant understand why unless they're completely blind
nothing as ugly as you should be able to live
i want to take a knife and rip away at your face
your body makes me gag how can you live like that
only you know what lies under those baggy clothes
god take your life away the day someone should see it
spare the innocence of everyone and show no one
lock yourself away somewhere so you're never seen
stay away from me stop corrupting my teenage mind
dont ever let me look back at your hideous self
ive seen enough your looks have scarred me for life
leave me alone stop haunting me dont look at me
i wanna look in the mirror and see a new person
dont wanna throw up as i look at the reflection
wanna love what i see and be proud of you of me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 61 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
hide yourself from all to see

Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



everywhere i look i see you staring back at me
i turn my head i close my eyes but i cant get away
your always there following my every step my every
move
im sick of seeing such pure ugliness but you wont
leave
i look up at the reflective glass and cry from you
there you are the ruler of all my nightmares
your ugly eyes peer back into mine taunting me
every move i make you copy showing how ugly you are
people say they like your appearance how you look
i cant understand why unless they're completely blind
nothing as ugly as you should be able to live
i want to take a knife and rip away at your face
your body makes me gag how can you live like that
only you know what lies under those baggy clothes
god take your life away the day someone should see it
spare the innocence of everyone and show no one
lock yourself away somewhere so you're never seen
stay away from me stop corrupting my teenage mind
dont ever let me look back at your hideous self
ive seen enough your looks have scarred me for life
leave me alone stop haunting me dont look at me
i wanna look in the mirror and see a new person
dont wanna throw up as i look at the reflection
wanna love what i see and be proud of you of me




Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-06-18 14:38:08]
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Re: hide yourself from all to see (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:39:35 PM AEST
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awwwwwwww........


Re: hide yourself from all to see (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:58:49 PM AEST
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Aw. Ami Jo. You are beautiful.
Far from ugly.
Your a wonderful person and I wish you never felt the way you described in your poem.
Much love.
::Elizabeth::




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