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Array ( [sid] => 52639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Tears [time] => 2004-06-18 20:56:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She comes up to me in a hurry,

Practicing her rage,

My soul engulfed by her power,

Her eyes,

Blue at first then turning to red,

She lunges at me every chance she gets,

Her lies,

The fibs,

The cold snide remarks said,

She stares at me and smirks,

My eyes filled with tears running down my

face,

The make up fading from my face reveals

what I want to say but can't,

I run away never telling anyone of what i

know,

Her craze phycotic thoughts,

Plotting for a chance to achieve their goal,

As I look up I see the moon with it's brilliant

glow,

I say to my self "i'll be alright, all I have to do

is be myself and it will all go away right?"

I smiled then frowned,

This would not go on any further,

Eyes of blood red,

All I thought of is to kill the one who

caused this pain,

I struck her with all of her might,

Blood erupting from the victims body,

I felt some sort of fearlessness,

My body began to quiver,

Those same blood red eyes turning to silver,

The cold crept on my body,

Englufed with all my regret,

I took my dagger and stabbed deep with

in my body,

My life of torment over for now,

Until it starts all over. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blossomingcherry5353 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Black Tears

Contributed by blossomingcherry5353 on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:56:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She comes up to me in a hurry,

Practicing her rage,

My soul engulfed by her power,

Her eyes,

Blue at first then turning to red,

She lunges at me every chance she gets,

Her lies,

The fibs,

The cold snide remarks said,

She stares at me and smirks,

My eyes filled with tears running down my

face,

The make up fading from my face reveals

what I want to say but can't,

I run away never telling anyone of what i

know,

Her craze phycotic thoughts,

Plotting for a chance to achieve their goal,

As I look up I see the moon with it's brilliant

glow,

I say to my self "i'll be alright, all I have to do

is be myself and it will all go away right?"

I smiled then frowned,

This would not go on any further,

Eyes of blood red,

All I thought of is to kill the one who

caused this pain,

I struck her with all of her might,

Blood erupting from the victims body,

I felt some sort of fearlessness,

My body began to quiver,

Those same blood red eyes turning to silver,

The cold crept on my body,

Englufed with all my regret,

I took my dagger and stabbed deep with

in my body,

My life of torment over for now,

Until it starts all over.

Copyright © blossomingcherry5353 ... [ 2004-06-18 20:56:10]
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Re: Black Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:29:49 PM AEST
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Hope thats just a nightmare my friend!
Very vivid!

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