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Array ( [sid] => 52649 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Under the moonlight~ [time] => 2004-06-18 22:08:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As you stand under the moonlight in the sand,
do you picture us together, hand in hand
Do you envision being with the one you adore,
holding one another on this lonely shore

Can you feel my breath upon the midnight air,
as it caresses your breast and touches your hair
Can you see my eyes when you gaze at the moon
with the promise inside that I will be home soon

Do you sense my love when you look to the sea
In these waves, do you see a reflection of me
Will these feelings you have remain inside
Or will your love wash away with the tide

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~Under the moonlight~

Contributed by RonMiller on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:08:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As you stand under the moonlight in the sand,
do you picture us together, hand in hand
Do you envision being with the one you adore,
holding one another on this lonely shore

Can you feel my breath upon the midnight air,
as it caresses your breast and touches your hair
Can you see my eyes when you gaze at the moon
with the promise inside that I will be home soon

Do you sense my love when you look to the sea
In these waves, do you see a reflection of me
Will these feelings you have remain inside
Or will your love wash away with the tide

Copyright © RonMiller ... [ 2004-06-18 22:08:52]
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Re: ~Under the moonlight~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:15:28 PM AEST
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Oh..this is so beautiful....well written.. I love it... thank you for sharing....
Welcome to YPDC..the site where ppl care....
Jenni

Re: ~Under the moonlight~ (User Rating: 1 )
by pyrofairyburning on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:25:44 PM AEST
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Wow. ShUdDeR// . That was was something lovely. I don't know how to explain how that made me feel. Imagine, if you will, I light in the bottom of a murky pool, it's dim with all of the filth above, but you see it, and it gives you hope. That is your work.

Blessed Be,
Tink

Re: ~Under the moonlight~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:33:35 PM AEST
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This poem is enchanting. Some lucky lady would love to receive this.

Welcome to our world of YPDC.

Rita

Re: ~Under the moonlight~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:03:27 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem. I can picture it in my head.. a girl standing along the shore in a pretty dress just looking out at the moon's reflection shining against the ocean's tide.

Re: ~Under the moonlight~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:40:37 AM AEST
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This is an excellent piece, my friend. The style is elegant, and the emotion is there too. Very well done!
Bravo!
Andrew

Re: ~Under the moonlight~ (User Rating: 1 )
by SnowB on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:35:22 PM AEST
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Ron, I love this one. It is very romantic...moonlight in the sand...and the ending leaves the reader with a little sadness and wondering if this love was meant to be...very beautiful and the rhyme is perfection.

Always...Lena

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