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Array ( [sid] => 52668 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How You Feel [time] => 2004-06-19 00:36:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don’t know how you feel
Don’t you know this things real
I’ve wanted this to happen forever.
Better things were the last time
When we were doing just fine.

Please tell me how you feel
So I cant help you heal

Tell me when you don’t want me around,
I’ll fall to the ground,
But I’ll leave
It hurts when you say that to me

When I am near you I’m happy
nervous with excitement
Heart racing,
I’m not exaggerating

Tell me when you don’t want me around.
Ill fall to the ground,
But I’ll leave
It hurts when you say that to me

You don’t want to be seen
Talking to me
I understand that you don’t want them to know.
But you don’t have to leave,
Or avoid me, you see
Just talk to me please

I don’t know how you feel
Please tell me how you feel.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 32 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

How You Feel

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:36:41 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I don’t know how you feel
Don’t you know this things real
I’ve wanted this to happen forever.
Better things were the last time
When we were doing just fine.

Please tell me how you feel
So I cant help you heal

Tell me when you don’t want me around,
I’ll fall to the ground,
But I’ll leave
It hurts when you say that to me

When I am near you I’m happy
nervous with excitement
Heart racing,
I’m not exaggerating

Tell me when you don’t want me around.
Ill fall to the ground,
But I’ll leave
It hurts when you say that to me

You don’t want to be seen
Talking to me
I understand that you don’t want them to know.
But you don’t have to leave,
Or avoid me, you see
Just talk to me please

I don’t know how you feel
Please tell me how you feel.

Copyright Â© willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-06-19 00:36:41]
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Re: How You Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:04:27 AM AEST
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This poem is very sad and filled with alot of emotion towards the person you are refering
to. Hope that you feel better and that things do work out for you.-luckycharm.

Re: How You Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:37:23 AM AEST
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awwww this is so sad, I can feel your pain through your writing.......hope you work things out soon, you written about it very well,

pixie xx

Re: How You Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:40:40 AM AEST
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Wow, this one is really sad. It's filled with so much emotion. I enjoyed this a lot, keep using your talent!

~Jenna

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