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Array ( [sid] => 52787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed [time] => 2004-06-19 21:34:36 [hometext] => Comments are welcomed this isnt suicide but there is nothing for cutting... [bodytext] => I have a dark angel
who visits me sometimes
She has left her mark
by ugly swollen lines
She comes in the darkness
when things are so bad
She stares into my eyes
and makes me mad
She takes my soul
and she gives it away
She sends me out
by myself to play
She sends me out,
out in the dark rain
It is this darkness
that sends me blindingly insane
She takes my hand
and she holds it tight
She knows not, any form of light
She has a favorite color
that she loves to see
But in the form of a liquid
her color must be
She watches me hurt,
she watches me cry
She watches in silence
while my pain I defy
She says nothing,
for she cannot speak
She is in control of me
for I am too weak
Her clothes are dark,
but her wings are dyed
With the color
that my lines have cried
The color of evil,
the color of death
The color my lines
have always wept
You will find my life
on the tips of her wings
When deep in the darkness,
my pain she brings







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My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:34:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I have a dark angel
who visits me sometimes
She has left her mark
by ugly swollen lines
She comes in the darkness
when things are so bad
She stares into my eyes
and makes me mad
She takes my soul
and she gives it away
She sends me out
by myself to play
She sends me out,
out in the dark rain
It is this darkness
that sends me blindingly insane
She takes my hand
and she holds it tight
She knows not, any form of light
She has a favorite color
that she loves to see
But in the form of a liquid
her color must be
She watches me hurt,
she watches me cry
She watches in silence
while my pain I defy
She says nothing,
for she cannot speak
She is in control of me
for I am too weak
Her clothes are dark,
but her wings are dyed
With the color
that my lines have cried
The color of evil,
the color of death
The color my lines
have always wept
You will find my life
on the tips of her wings
When deep in the darkness,
my pain she brings











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Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by betty on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:46:38 PM AEST
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That is the best poem that I've read on this site. You have so much talent, I fear someday you may be famous.
Don't forget, it is the color of life too.
and as I tell all the others with poems like yours:
"beware of infection", says the med student.



Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:08:27 PM AEST
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This is definitely one of the best poems I have ever read on this site. I am a cutter and I have tried to write out the feelings and emotions and it just hasn't even been this good. You definitely have atalent. You wrote out my thoughts exactly. Some people will never understand what you are saying but believe me I do. And 'she' is a B*TCH! Thank you so much for this write.

Lindsey


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:11:58 PM AEST
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belisima


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:13:06 PM AEST
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This went nicley everything went together i aggree with betty the best on the site. I don't know how you got so good at writting but you could really teach me a thing or two. Well GREAT JOB


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:23:38 AM AEST
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this is amazing, wow, wow, wow

pixie xx


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:34:47 AM AEST
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i love everything i have read of yours, i think you are really great. i like the structure, how it is all short....i think it gives great effect to the words.


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:19:34 PM AEST
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you know your not alone on this... If you ever need someone im here and im sure lots of other will be too. we all have to help eachother sometimes. great write powerful again.... A++++


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:05:09 PM AEST
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this was really good dont ever put that golden pen down not even for a moment. i've read quite few poems so far on here but i'm in awe with this one. great job.


Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:01:20 PM AEST
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Great title, it caught my attention from the beginning. And I love the line, The color my lines have always wept, great personification. I love a good dark poem and this one genuinely lived up to it



Re: My dark angels wings...the color my lines bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by dcampbell1313 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:17:47 PM AEST
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very good.




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