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Array ( [sid] => 5279 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Unspoken Words [time] => 2002-10-18 16:45:00 [hometext] => This is a poem about someone who I relaly really like,, but all he does is act like he likes me , and then goes off to his girl friend.. It relaly aint that good because I aint that good at these things, but at last I tryed and got some of my feelings and thoughts out.. [bodytext] => Skin so soft,
Body so built,
I wish I could have you,
But all i do is sit.
I sit in the darkness,
And wait for you to come,
Im waiting for you to take me away,
Because im missing you.
All I can think about anymore is you
Because thats all thats on my mind
I wish I could have you,
But all I have is a picture of you in my mind
Ever since that last day in September,
The first time I saw you,
I've wanted to tell you how I felt about you.
But I could'nt,
And I can't..
Until You tell me what your wanting with me
By the way, I Love You. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 33 [informant] => pepzislut69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Unspoken Words

Contributed by pepzislut69 on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Skin so soft,
Body so built,
I wish I could have you,
But all i do is sit.
I sit in the darkness,
And wait for you to come,
Im waiting for you to take me away,
Because im missing you.
All I can think about anymore is you
Because thats all thats on my mind
I wish I could have you,
But all I have is a picture of you in my mind
Ever since that last day in September,
The first time I saw you,
I've wanted to tell you how I felt about you.
But I could'nt,
And I can't..
Until You tell me what your wanting with me
By the way, I Love You.

Copyright © pepzislut69 ... [ 2002-10-18 16:45:00]
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Re: Unspoken Words (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 05:49:34 PM AEST
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I like this poetry. Simple and touch my heart.... I feel same as the writer ........ I love someone but I cant tell him what I feel .. i hope the writer will find his/her love

Re: Unspoken Words (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 01:02:42 AM AEST
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just a guest herew again, nice words,simple but nice!Guest

Re: Unspoken Words (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 07:58:20 AM AEST
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Very nice writing!! Somehow I can relate to what you say!! Nebill

Re: Unspoken Words (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:02:55 AM AEST
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The emotional content is very easy to relate to for anyone who's in a similar circumstance. Don't ever lose the feelings as you practice the writing. It is the heart that conveys the emotions and in this aspect you are right on the money.

I couldn't, I can't... I know this too.

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