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[aid] => mick
[title] => Opened Heart
[time] => 2004-06-20 00:05:03
[hometext] => Well, I'm not going to say anything about this one, I mean, What more can I say?
[bodytext] =>
Let me share a little thing, about this silly old man
It's something I keep from all, but sure some will understand
To start with some of these lines, may not fit together
Tho I have written this poem, it doesn’t rhyme to the letter
In real life I am a loner, mostly sitting on my own
Tho you wouldn’t know, from on the net or the phone
In person, I am no good with words, to ones I do not know
And to single ladies, I must seem so very slow
If I come to like you, and wish you a ‘close’ friend
Getting this started, would need to come from your end
Body language I never learnt, so if you like me too
I must say I’m sorry, for I wouldn’t have a clue
As for the little things, that could start a relationship
I guess I must be backward, as for me it is like this
To start and form a kiss, there must be some love there
And if it goes further, our lives we would want to share
My heart isn’t that strong, and has been hurt in the past
So any future love, would be taken slow to ensure it lasts
Please don’t misunderstand, when I find the right lass
To my heart, body, soul and mind, she has an open pass.
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Opened Heart
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:05:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Let me share a little thing, about this silly old man
It's something I keep from all, but sure some will understand
To start with some of these lines, may not fit together
Tho I have written this poem, it doesn’t rhyme to the letter
In real life I am a loner, mostly sitting on my own
Tho you wouldn’t know, from on the net or the phone
In person, I am no good with words, to ones I do not know
And to single ladies, I must seem so very slow
If I come to like you, and wish you a ‘close’ friend
Getting this started, would need to come from your end
Body language I never learnt, so if you like me too
I must say I’m sorry, for I wouldn’t have a clue
As for the little things, that could start a relationship
I guess I must be backward, as for me it is like this
To start and form a kiss, there must be some love there
And if it goes further, our lives we would want to share
My heart isn’t that strong, and has been hurt in the past
So any future love, would be taken slow to ensure it lasts
Please don’t misunderstand, when I find the right lass
To my heart, body, soul and mind, she has an open pass.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2004-06-20 00:05:03]
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:11:52 AM AEST
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Ooohhh..Mick bares his soul…finally!!!
Hmmmm…do you think you will be able to handle it?? I mean if someone tells you how they really feel?? Lol..
Thanks for opening your heart...
(((((((hugs)))))))
Jen
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by betty on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:16:59 AM AEST
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| Now that is what poetry is all about.!!-betty |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:51:07 AM AEST
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It is as it should be. Take your time, you will find her. I wish you the best of luck in your endeavor. She has to be for you and the children. That will be a difficult order to fill? I hope not. It is hard being alone.
Best wishes,
Rita |
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:30:06 AM AEST
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Mick ma man honesty and good poetry is hard to fine and ever harder to find together, but you welded the two together perfectly. Beautiful poem dude.
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:37:14 AM AEST
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Well Mick you got me to smile.
I really did enjoy this one.
Beautiful write and good flow to it.
:)
Hope you haven't actually been hurt.
If you want I'm sure I could send some girls to go kick her butt. :P |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:53:40 AM AEST
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Right there with ya, Mick!
Don't worry. One of these days...
(I leave the ... because I don't know what the future holds! But trust me, it will be good. I just know somehow.)
But that's what being a person of character is all about. Don't think you need to play the game - I detest the game - the best women don't play it either.
Good luck, old chap.
Andrew |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:30:44 AM AEST
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An open and honest heart is the one thing most ladies love ... and this poem reflects your true self Mick - a great write ... watch out for the deluge!
:))) Jan |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:38:09 AM AEST
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from the heart well written and what any true lady would want...
Shari |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by venkat on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:29:35 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write..honest words..May your wishes be fulfilled..best of luck. venkat |
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:13:36 AM AEST
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trully great poem here Mick, thanks for sharing
pixie xx |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:40:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem Mick... :) |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by thumper on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:23:32 AM AEST
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Very heartfelt and honest. So what if you're a loner? Take your time and the right person will come along. You don't have to rush in and out of relationships to find the right person. And, bully for you that you're not a "player", makes you a much more sincere person. My gram always told me that there is someone out there for you and you will find them. It will happen! Slow and steady wins the race! lol Have faith! Peace and happiness to you, Mick, for you are a good person!
A Grateful (Ahem!!) Poet
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:01:34 AM AEST
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| Very sweet Mick, but I think your heart is open to all of us here, you've done so much for this wonderful site, thank you, always Val |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:15:14 PM AEST
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| Mick thanks for opening up to us! That is asking alot! You will one day find Mrs. Right and boy will she be a delight on here for all of us to let her know what a wonderful guy she has found! Christina |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:09:32 PM AEST
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Mick thanks for sharing this honest moment with us your a wonderful guy with a huge heart and any lady would be very happy to have you your also a gentlemen what more could anyone ask for.
Michelle |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:21:09 PM AEST
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| You already share so much with us. I believe that with all you give Mick, its gonna come back at you tenfold. |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:52:22 PM AEST
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oooo! i love this! sooo heartfelt and sooo beautiful! wow, mick, more please, this poem is exquisite, and just so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Opened Heart
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:17:42 AM AEST
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this was absolutely marvelous it's very seldom you see or hear a man open up his heart as you did in this wonderful write. very interesting read. thanks for sharing this amazing poem.
Brandy |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:32:46 AM AEST
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Dang,
I've been missing out on muvho.
Very beauifull.
hugg, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Opened Heart
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:41:45 AM AEST
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Hot, hot, hot write.
gosh don't know how I've missed all this good stuff.
kepp writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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