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Array ( [sid] => 52840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no title yet [time] => 2004-06-20 09:24:54 [hometext] => after years of fighting with myself... just a first draft and badly needs revision but comments welcome [bodytext] => when did i let you conquer my mind?
hide my smile, my laugh, impossible to find
you stole my memory and blinded my eyes
15 out of 22-each morning drinking my cries

i'm not skinny enough for your taste
i'm not pretty enough; wasting space
i'm not good enough for your friends
i'll be drowned out till this song ends

you're not my queen to strike me as i bow
i'm walking away from this mirror now
i get to smile and be beautiful today
not a tear in my eyes; i never liked you anyways
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 6 [informant] => luinil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

no title yet

Contributed by luinil on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:24:54 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

when did i let you conquer my mind?
hide my smile, my laugh, impossible to find
you stole my memory and blinded my eyes
15 out of 22-each morning drinking my cries

i'm not skinny enough for your taste
i'm not pretty enough; wasting space
i'm not good enough for your friends
i'll be drowned out till this song ends

you're not my queen to strike me as i bow
i'm walking away from this mirror now
i get to smile and be beautiful today
not a tear in my eyes; i never liked you anyways

Copyright © luinil ... [ 2004-06-20 09:24:54]
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Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:33:24 AM AEST
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sorry for you life long fight,i know where you are coming from.... great write

pixie xx

Re: no title yet (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:44:15 PM AEST
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Nice poem.

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