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Array ( [sid] => 52841 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moral Compass [time] => 2004-06-20 09:29:04 [hometext] => A poem about trying to find direction in one's life. [bodytext] => Lost our children
All-Star children
Always yearning
Never free

Christmas crumbles
Tears and tumbles
Blind and boating
On the sea

Burn the fires
All the fires
Throw the witches
To the geese

Have a baby
Hope he’ll save me
Foggy Heaven
Never free [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Moral Compass

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:29:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Lost our children
All-Star children
Always yearning
Never free

Christmas crumbles
Tears and tumbles
Blind and boating
On the sea

Burn the fires
All the fires
Throw the witches
To the geese

Have a baby
Hope he’ll save me
Foggy Heaven
Never free

Copyright Â© Butterat_Zool ... [ 2004-06-20 09:29:04]
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Re: Moral Compass (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:33:03 AM AEST
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By the way, in the second stanza, that's Tears as in "The salty tears of the crying infant watered my lawn more than his scraped-up knee." and not tears as in "It tears at my heart to see people in love with someone they could never have." Hope you enjoyed my bad poem. Butterat Zool.

Re: Moral Compass (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:28:17 PM AEST
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i wouldnt call it bad. i just have no idea what this is about. so i cant judge what i dont know can i? anyway leaves mystery for me to wonder about later. =]

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