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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Thanks For The Advice
[time] => 2002-10-19 07:30:00
[hometext] => This is written to everyone who has posted comments on my work and left me advice as to what I should do regarding the situation I'm currently in. I do appreciate everyones comments and thoughts, all of them. Whether I agree with them or not, I'm always open to everyones point of view. Some have apologized for some of their comments thinking they have oversteped their bounds. No need to apologize, I post my work to be read and I expect nothing less than honest reactions and thoughts. Anyway, I wrote this because so many have left advice and I felt I should respond to it.
[bodytext] => I appreciate the comments
And all the advice Knowing people care Is really quite nice Many think I should leave Say goodbye and be on my way If I was to do that It would be my heart I betray Your words have been considered Follow that advice, I must decline For my heart’s chosen her The decisions not mine Though the situation seems unchanged And I’m still feeling pain By leaving my true love What could I gain? Some say by my leaving She’ll soon see what she’s lost But then I’ll be gone Our true love the cost I don’t want her to see what she’s lost Rather realize what’s right here I think that can happen If she can move past the fear The way I’ll always love her I need her to believe I don’t see that happening If I choose to leave If I walked away Leaving her without Then I’ve broken a promise Increasing her doubt She is the one How I know I can’t explain If we’re one day together It’s worth all my pain When I’m not with her I feel incomplete, you see Not only a vital part of my life She’s a vital part of me I fall more deeply in love With each breath that she takes Every touch of her hand Every movement she makes I look in her eyes I see this dream coming true I see our future together I hear her say, “I do.” Without her in my life I’d surely be lost My heart would grow cold Covered with frost She’s all I’ve ever needed I just hope she needs me I continue waiting And one day we’ll see You may not agree with me Say my decision is a mistake But I must follow my heart My promises, I won’t break I will be by her side Until her decision she makes No matter what I must go through No matter how long it takes If the time comes When she tells me we can’t be I’ll leave with no regrets And no “what ifs” will plague me If she comes to have faith in us If she sees I’ve never lied We will start our life together And I’ll never leave her side But I thank you for your advice And for hoping the best for me But I can’t leave "the one" It’s with her, I need to be [comments] => 7 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 25 [informant] => MisterRight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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