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[aid] => mick
[title] => to put an end to this
[time] => 2004-06-20 18:37:51
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[bodytext] => when Im alone I worry
that my walls are caving in
I can never think straight
never know where to begin
I cant fix my porblems
I just make more mistakes
sometimes I often wonder
if I even have what it takes
everything I touch
seems to fall apart
it has never worked my way
not once from the start
and I get so overwhelmed
not knowing where to turn
im stuck in my own hell
forever here ill burn
without a helping hand
without a guiding light
I know ill never win
I should give up the fight
I grow so tired of it
this constant screwing up
and its when Im at my lowest
that no-one gives a ****
they always turn there back
and run away from me
so the help I really need
I dont think ill ever see
so I fail and fail and fail
everytime every single day
Im so far off the path
it seems so far away
im tired of my errors
my worries that I face
cause everyone I fail
Im such a big disgrace
the only one I can remedy
the problem that I can fix
Is ending my own life
to put an end to this
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 249
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[informant] => holderofthestone
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to put an end to this
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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when Im alone I worry
that my walls are caving in
I can never think straight
never know where to begin
I cant fix my porblems
I just make more mistakes
sometimes I often wonder
if I even have what it takes
everything I touch
seems to fall apart
it has never worked my way
not once from the start
and I get so overwhelmed
not knowing where to turn
im stuck in my own hell
forever here ill burn
without a helping hand
without a guiding light
I know ill never win
I should give up the fight
I grow so tired of it
this constant screwing up
and its when Im at my lowest
that no-one gives a ****
they always turn there back
and run away from me
so the help I really need
I dont think ill ever see
so I fail and fail and fail
everytime every single day
Im so far off the path
it seems so far away
im tired of my errors
my worries that I face
cause everyone I fail
Im such a big disgrace
the only one I can remedy
the problem that I can fix
Is ending my own life
to put an end to this
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2004-06-20 18:37:51]
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:43:52 PM AEST
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| Okay, please tell me you didn't really mean that. life is not that bad is it? Can I help? |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:49:19 PM AEST
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Im gonna post a poem I wrote for Rugby_Player and it is also meant for the people on this site who are at their lowest point so when my time is up and I can post thats the first one I will post I want you to read it...keep your head held high and hold it above others...youll be fine...I hope...great write
much love,
Dani
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:53:33 PM AEST
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| painful words beautifully written... hope you feel better soon * |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:18:08 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, im here if you need to talk, remember your cared about here and your poetry is certainly Not a failure, your a brilliantly talently soul:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: to put an end to this
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:57:07 PM AEST
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this was so sad i can relate well with this one i'm always a failure at everything i do,i'm always a screw up everytime i turn around. i've been thinking about crawling up in a corner to die and be put out of my misery.hope everything gets better for you good luck
Brandy |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:21:45 PM AEST
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| failure is in the eye of the beholder i believe. people are not there to rely on, people are simply there; you must rely on yourself. you cannot fail yourself if you still end up living. when you are at that lowest point is when you can only go higher. life tests you with every decision and every emotion. it is possible to fail one of lifes tests just as easy as passing one. and who ever said there was a path to follow? there is no wrong and there is no right, there is no good there is no bad, its all subjective. you can spin anything the way you want, spin it to your liking. use what brings you down to bring you up is all there is to say. and if you take your own life, you failed yourself, and all the other failures would never have mattered. and with all that said you may forget it or remember it. words are useless compared to actions. |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:16:40 PM AEST
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Oh, holder... *sigh* ... you are on the right path. Your journey is one most definitely worth taking - I'd argue that not 'going there' would have been a greater failure. You grow because of it... and we... we are honored with the poetry that results from your travels. One step at a time... one beautiful poem after another... it's all anyone can do.
With understanding,
SNM |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Calista on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:55:06 PM AEST
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wow...this poem makes me want to whisper in reply, its very powerful. i believe deep down you know youre not a disgrace to anyone, and that ending your own life will put an end to it. i also believe that this poem was written for more than simply stating it. although, it is a uniquely written masterpiece. keep em coming...
~Calista |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:58:08 PM AEST
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| i seriously wrote a poem similar to this one. if it means anything, i completely know how you feel. just, alone. |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:32:02 AM AEST
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| i really liked this...i feel the exact same way. It sucks sometimes but you just have to hold your head up hi and thik everything will be okay..and it will be..great write |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:28:41 AM AEST
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True expressions of life experience.I knew many of us are struggling a lot in our lives..though problems may differ from you and me and some one else..but any we shall not give in to sorrow..we must stand like an moved rock till we feel some happiness.. very well written..I can relate
few lines of this poem as I am a damn failure in money matters many a time..
venkat |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:22:01 AM AEST
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Cheer up my friend.
I know the feelings but we must keep on keeping on. You are a sucess at writing.
Also your comment on my write I say to u now, I hope u feel better soon.
U have a major talent, and as a fellow poet we need all the help we can get.
Please grab your pen and with it's magic turn your sorrow to joy.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by MDodgen on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:09:23 PM AEST
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| you are so loved, just look at all the comments on this poem. you're not a failure. i fail more then you. good write, very powerful, makes me want to cry. 5 stars |
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Re: to put an end to this
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 12:40:51 AM AEST
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| know this feeling exactly. I fail at everything also. Maybe i should take this poems advise and put an end to all my misery |
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