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Array ( [sid] => 53040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Trust [time] => 2004-06-21 16:28:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You were someone I trust
Why do you think you must
Lie to me
Could you not see
You don’t have to be
Someone else around me

It hurts that you wont tell me to my face
The words just cant erase
You talk behind my back?
Supposedly it’s a fact

Tel me how you feel
Don’t make a big deal
But you’ve broken the seal
Of my trust

These words hurt me
But not as must as you see
It hurts more that you lied
You never even tried
You didn’t have to lie
Its not like you can buy
My trust

Cause this is real
I’m making it a big deal
Cause now I feel
Betrayed and used too.

So I’ll do what you ask
And I’ll wear a mask,
Pretending I don’t know you

I wont bother you
Or say a word to you too.

I just wanted to make you feel
Theres something real
That I really care
But it just isn’t fair
Cause lies from you I just cant bare.

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My Trust

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:28:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You were someone I trust
Why do you think you must
Lie to me
Could you not see
You don’t have to be
Someone else around me

It hurts that you wont tell me to my face
The words just cant erase
You talk behind my back?
Supposedly it’s a fact

Tel me how you feel
Don’t make a big deal
But you’ve broken the seal
Of my trust

These words hurt me
But not as must as you see
It hurts more that you lied
You never even tried
You didn’t have to lie
Its not like you can buy
My trust

Cause this is real
I’m making it a big deal
Cause now I feel
Betrayed and used too.

So I’ll do what you ask
And I’ll wear a mask,
Pretending I don’t know you

I wont bother you
Or say a word to you too.

I just wanted to make you feel
Theres something real
That I really care
But it just isn’t fair
Cause lies from you I just cant bare.

Copyright Â© willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-06-21 16:28:04]
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Re: My Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:00:49 PM AEST
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I Like Good

Re: My Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by rollingon4you on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:29:24 PM AEST
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if someone lies they arent worth trying to trust

Re: My Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:07:19 AM AEST
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trust is the hardest thing to repair in a relationship, great write, ((((HUGS))))

Pixie xx

Re: My Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:46:03 PM AEST
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a very nice write
im going through this right now too
that person isnt worth it
if they're going to lie
and talk behind your back

hope everything worked out

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