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Array ( [sid] => 53213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blade [time] => 2004-06-22 17:18:28 [hometext] => I wrote this when a while ago when I used to cut myself. I've stopped now though. But it''s not really suicidal poetry because even though I used to cut, I was never suicidal. It''s just another way to deal with pain...not the most healthy way... [bodytext] => Blade flashes sun
Invisible to me
That blade sits
Staring back at me

Cut now
A little bit deeper
My grasp
A little bit stronger
Take the horror away
Replace the grief with pain

Blood rise
A little bit higher
My fingers a little
Bit colder
Take the horror away
Replace the grief with pain

Inviting demons to come
Live beneath my skin
Underneath these scars
Underneath this blood

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Blade

Contributed by iluvpencils on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:18:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Blade flashes sun
Invisible to me
That blade sits
Staring back at me

Cut now
A little bit deeper
My grasp
A little bit stronger
Take the horror away
Replace the grief with pain

Blood rise
A little bit higher
My fingers a little
Bit colder
Take the horror away
Replace the grief with pain

Inviting demons to come
Live beneath my skin
Underneath these scars
Underneath this blood

Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-06-22 17:18:28]
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Re: Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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wow, very powerful lots of your feelings and emotions flowing right through it...nice way of talking about it...keep it up keep it coming....

much love,
Dani

Re: Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by JacquelineAnn on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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I love your peom...I cut myself every once in a while and I know its bad, but in a way it is sort of addicting I guess...I really wish I could stop but I just have so much anger, but keep writing..I love your peoms...

Re: Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:04:44 PM AEST
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good poem there I used to cut and am still trying to beat the addiction. I liked your analogy towards the demons... its exactly how i see it as well. Keep up the writing!

Bobo (Joel)

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