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Array ( [sid] => 53302 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Peace [time] => 2004-06-23 04:46:01 [hometext] => This has been bothering me for the past few years. [bodytext] => Carmine-coated promises, heating up the night
Burning, arching clear over prussian tints of light
Watching in silence as we choke on our synthetic compassion
And I try to tell myself I'm dreaming
but I'm dreaming through a mire of glasshouses
What little life can I gain impaled by shards of such pathos?
And I try to tell myself I'm dreaming
but I'm dreaming through a deadbeat space
And I try to...
I try so hard to tell myself...


Will someone stop these questions that deny me peace? [comments] => 8 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Avarice_Riot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Peace

Contributed by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:46:01 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Carmine-coated promises, heating up the night
Burning, arching clear over prussian tints of light
Watching in silence as we choke on our synthetic compassion
And I try to tell myself I'm dreaming
but I'm dreaming through a mire of glasshouses
What little life can I gain impaled by shards of such pathos?
And I try to tell myself I'm dreaming
but I'm dreaming through a deadbeat space
And I try to...
I try so hard to tell myself...


Will someone stop these questions that deny me peace?




Copyright © Avarice_Riot ... [ 2004-06-23 04:46:01]
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Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:52:51 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking and said well.
huggs,
emy
When I'm confused I ask God.


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:57:10 AM AEST
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Aah..........it is very hard to stop questions..
fantastic imagery.. excellent expressions..
".synthetic compassion"
"shards of such pathos"
"a mire of glasshouses
"a deadbeat space......."
I like your amazingly beautiful poem..venkat


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:59:18 AM AEST
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You truly have a wonderful way with words.
I too have longed for peace on more than one occasions especially since I share a room with my little sister...Arrgghh...
Great write.


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:17:58 AM AEST
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Sometimes when you're pondering on something and try to find the answer in yourself, you keep finding new paths in the depths of your soul... How hard it is to find what you're looking for...the answers to the questions you only know and possess....
Good, intense poem!
Hugs,
Hur


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:47:23 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. You have a way of weaving words into your poem so intricately. I love it.


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:56:12 AM AEST
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Wow, that made me think.
I love your poems. lol.
Such great images here.
And i love the question at the end. I think it ends it perfectly. Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:39:57 AM AEST
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Ok now im really jealous..


Re: Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:15:51 AM AEST
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what a great way in expressin your feelings
everytime i read one your poems i feel like i wanna read it again and again




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