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Array ( [sid] => 53307 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letter from the inside [time] => 2004-06-23 06:02:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dear Guardian Angel,

Could you please help me now I call upon you friend. I’ve made myself a final choice and now my life shall end. Help my loved ones with the pain, if they should feel any at all, watch over my family and friends, and take their every call. Show the world what love can do, when it’s not returned, given recklessly without a clue, and now my heart will burn. Show them my love for him was true, and for him I will fulfill my fate, one last person’s blood to be spilt, on this very date. You are beautiful to me, don’t follow but just trust, have ease at the thought, that you know I must.

From one broken soul
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Letter from the inside

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:02:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dear Guardian Angel,

Could you please help me now I call upon you friend. I’ve made myself a final choice and now my life shall end. Help my loved ones with the pain, if they should feel any at all, watch over my family and friends, and take their every call. Show the world what love can do, when it’s not returned, given recklessly without a clue, and now my heart will burn. Show them my love for him was true, and for him I will fulfill my fate, one last person’s blood to be spilt, on this very date. You are beautiful to me, don’t follow but just trust, have ease at the thought, that you know I must.

From one broken soul

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Re: Letter from the inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:07:47 AM AEST
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Wow!
I loved this poem!
Very powerful with a lot of meaning behind the words...
Brilliant piece of work,
Katie

Re: Letter from the inside (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:07:08 AM AEST
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this was beautiful....shows lots of emotions
luv always

Re: Letter from the inside (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:22:37 AM AEST
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wow, this is so powerful, I loved it

pixie xx

Re: Letter from the inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:45:28 PM AEST
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wow, very beautiful wrote lots of your emotions and feeling spilling through...

I hope none of what you are saying is true...your a talented writer and have a friend in every one of us here at YPDC I hope you ethink the decision in taking your life if you are really planning on doing this keep your head held high and remember your not a lone...I am to a suicidal cutter and I am making it even if things rae getting worse I seem to keep pulling myself through the storm...beautiful write very sad and powerful all at the same time..keep it up keep it coming *please*

read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think....

much love,
Dani

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