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Array ( [sid] => 5335 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Clear [time] => 2002-10-20 11:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => classic foe in lay of silence
hoping for a chance to open
enter in the realm in violence
where doors will close unspoken

i'm running through this vision in my skull
painted bleak grays and blues but not so dull
i'm jumping out of the way of new surprises
a dash of faith that this moment will go...

speed
integration
solemn oath rendered timeless
bleed
reiteration
faded memories come back crisp
and clear.

eraser fiend at bay in process
interim thoughts come follow
avoid arenas and leave excess
gaining choice upon the hollow

i'm running through this pollution in my skull
painted dreary black and white but not dull
i'm jumping right in light of new surprises
a pinch of hope that this moment will go...

speed
participation
solemn oath remembered always
bleed
approximation
faded moments come back crisp
and clear.

the moment is fresh and appears serene
tangible real now tell me is it a dream?
wanting for what i hope a smile pristine
anabashed pieces come back to this thing
chilling reminders of what it could be
a pill of time cut down short one scene
in my prime to remember quickly you see
what has come and will stay for infinity

speed...


***
(10/19/02) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 34 [informant] => daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Clear

Contributed by daniel on Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



classic foe in lay of silence
hoping for a chance to open
enter in the realm in violence
where doors will close unspoken

i'm running through this vision in my skull
painted bleak grays and blues but not so dull
i'm jumping out of the way of new surprises
a dash of faith that this moment will go...

speed
integration
solemn oath rendered timeless
bleed
reiteration
faded memories come back crisp
and clear.

eraser fiend at bay in process
interim thoughts come follow
avoid arenas and leave excess
gaining choice upon the hollow

i'm running through this pollution in my skull
painted dreary black and white but not dull
i'm jumping right in light of new surprises
a pinch of hope that this moment will go...

speed
participation
solemn oath remembered always
bleed
approximation
faded moments come back crisp
and clear.

the moment is fresh and appears serene
tangible real now tell me is it a dream?
wanting for what i hope a smile pristine
anabashed pieces come back to this thing
chilling reminders of what it could be
a pill of time cut down short one scene
in my prime to remember quickly you see
what has come and will stay for infinity

speed...


***
(10/19/02)




Copyright © daniel ... [ 2002-10-20 11:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 12:35:01 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this very much, Danny... hope all is well with you..
Jenni


Re: Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 12:57:39 AM AEST
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I give it a 3.8. Interesting yet boring. I always like your stuff.
jz


Re: Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by InexactExactness on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 07:59:32 AM AEST
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hey not bad i enjoyed it. thanx




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