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The Night-Mare
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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come here honey
spite my fears
bring me to life again
feeding apon your dreams
swallow the last happy thought
that grazed a childs mind
now all they see are night mares
of coming death and the long dead
open bare minds
with nothing to protect them
each night i dive to get my fill
slurping up raw flesh and will
a cruel killing
monster
who steals
the inoccence
of childs
dreams....
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-06-23 16:47:45]
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Re: The Night-Mare
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:50:02 PM AEST
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*grins*
I liked this one quite a lot-- vivid and delightfully chilling.
Spelling errors detract juuuust a bit, but overall this one's a good poem.
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Re: The Night-Mare
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:06:01 PM AEST
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ooo nice!
brought a chill to me...very dark
I love writing dark stuff too
Great Job
please comment on my stuff too
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Re: The Night-Mare
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:51:17 PM AEST
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oooh very creepy... don't think I'll be getting much sleep tonite...
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Re: The Night-Mare
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:06:59 AM AEST
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great write, i love these psychotic writes
pixie xx |
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